10/7/2022 c14 80Bren Gail
Hermione getting one over on Lily was classic and priceless. I am curious about Snape's potion making in the class. I doubt the explanation is something as simple as him using his HBP potion skills to better the potion. Whatever the potion is, I hope it doesn't cause irreparable harm to Hermione, the Marauders, or Regulus. I am both amazed and begrudgingly thankful that Hermione has gotten comfortable with Peter.
Hermione getting one over on Lily was classic and priceless. I am curious about Snape's potion making in the class. I doubt the explanation is something as simple as him using his HBP potion skills to better the potion. Whatever the potion is, I hope it doesn't cause irreparable harm to Hermione, the Marauders, or Regulus. I am both amazed and begrudgingly thankful that Hermione has gotten comfortable with Peter.
10/7/2022 c13 Bren Gail
I love how Regulus is portrayed. His interactions with Sirius, Hermione, and the others are quite charming and endearing much like he. The conversation he and Hermione had about family abandonment was quite sad yet brave. The end of the chapter was ominous, but I am glad he warned her. The hero in him is already showing.
I love how Regulus is portrayed. His interactions with Sirius, Hermione, and the others are quite charming and endearing much like he. The conversation he and Hermione had about family abandonment was quite sad yet brave. The end of the chapter was ominous, but I am glad he warned her. The hero in him is already showing.
10/6/2022 c11 Bren Gail
This story is well written and engaging. I am very intrigued with whether she'll return to the future or stay in the past and have her present grow into the future. Just when I decide I'm committed to theory that she stays in the past or her present grows into the future, I have doubts. The doubts are especially triggered by references to her Sirius and his interactions with her back (or forward) in the 1990s. Regardless of which theory, or perhaps a mixture of the theories, are correct, I am excited to read how the story unfolds.
This story is well written and engaging. I am very intrigued with whether she'll return to the future or stay in the past and have her present grow into the future. Just when I decide I'm committed to theory that she stays in the past or her present grows into the future, I have doubts. The doubts are especially triggered by references to her Sirius and his interactions with her back (or forward) in the 1990s. Regardless of which theory, or perhaps a mixture of the theories, are correct, I am excited to read how the story unfolds.
9/25/2022 c16 3Karatekid-Ninja
I love McGonagall so much. Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter and can’t wait for more xx
I love McGonagall so much. Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter and can’t wait for more xx
9/22/2022 c1 Bren Gail
Splendid beginning. I'm hooked.
Splendid beginning. I'm hooked.
9/22/2022 c9 Bren Gail
I have so many questions. Beautiful moment between both Hermiones and both Siriuses
I have so many questions. Beautiful moment between both Hermiones and both Siriuses
9/22/2022 c8 Bren Gail
Brilliantly written. I love strong, warrior Hermione. Sirius is endearing and charming. I hope to read more Hermione and Alice interaction.
Brilliantly written. I love strong, warrior Hermione. Sirius is endearing and charming. I hope to read more Hermione and Alice interaction.
9/22/2022 c7 Bren Gail
Oh, wow. The character trigger at the end was so unexpected, but thoroughly made sense as to why he would be triggering for her. I love how throughout the chapter she has treated Peter kindly. I loved reading about her first day of classes. The flower hair tie was such a nice touch.
Oh, wow. The character trigger at the end was so unexpected, but thoroughly made sense as to why he would be triggering for her. I love how throughout the chapter she has treated Peter kindly. I loved reading about her first day of classes. The flower hair tie was such a nice touch.
9/22/2022 c6 Bren Gail
Such a bittersweet chapter. I'm glad he now knows, but he now knows, you know? Beautifully written.
Such a bittersweet chapter. I'm glad he now knows, but he now knows, you know? Beautifully written.
9/22/2022 c5 Bren Gail
Hermione strategizing and plotting in her journal/book while in the medical ward is such a Hermione thing to do. I adored the interaction between her and Sirius in this chapter.
Hermione strategizing and plotting in her journal/book while in the medical ward is such a Hermione thing to do. I adored the interaction between her and Sirius in this chapter.
9/22/2022 c4 Bren Gail
Such a wonderful chapter. The memory was brutal, but well written. The end with Sirius coming to terms with his past view and current view of Dumbledore was great. I like how perceptive Sirius is.
Such a wonderful chapter. The memory was brutal, but well written. The end with Sirius coming to terms with his past view and current view of Dumbledore was great. I like how perceptive Sirius is.
9/22/2022 c3 Bren Gail
I adore how protective Sirius is of Hermione already. I love the Marauders shenanigans and how their characters are portrayed. The prank and the consequences of the prank has me on the edge of my seat. That cliffhanger was executed brilliantly.
I adore how protective Sirius is of Hermione already. I love the Marauders shenanigans and how their characters are portrayed. The prank and the consequences of the prank has me on the edge of my seat. That cliffhanger was executed brilliantly.
9/22/2022 c2 Bren Gail
I love the character dialogue and interactions. The contents of Poppy's medical notes were astonishing. Having those included was a great idea.
I love the character dialogue and interactions. The contents of Poppy's medical notes were astonishing. Having those included was a great idea.