for Representing Strider's People12/20/2024 c1 Guest
Idiot troll
Idiot troll
11/26/2024 c1 Guest
All of Utekar’s and Beuwolf’s fics are pure AI
Much like how you are pure stupid
All of Utekar’s and Beuwolf’s fics are pure AI
Much like how you are pure stupid
11/7/2024 c1 Guest
Lonely misandrists like yourself would enjoy AI writing wouldn’t you?
Lonely misandrists like yourself would enjoy AI writing wouldn’t you?
9/2/2024 c1 
152rebecca-in-blue
One big block of bold text makes this very difficult to read, even at less than 400 words. For being part of an English-proficiency test, I'm a little surprised that you don't know to put different speakers in different paragraphs, and there are several punctuation mistakes around the grammar, too.
152rebecca-in-blueOne big block of bold text makes this very difficult to read, even at less than 400 words. For being part of an English-proficiency test, I'm a little surprised that you don't know to put different speakers in different paragraphs, and there are several punctuation mistakes around the grammar, too.
5/26/2024 c1 Grammar Police
You meant "sound of her name." "Out" isn't grammatically correct.
10-year-old, not 10 year old.
You need a comma after "by" before the quote.
Again, you need a comma after "said" before the quote.
The comma after "up" is not necessary.
You are missing a comma after "later."
reddish-brown, not reddish brown.
A comma after "windows."
You don't need the word "that" between 'library' and 'you.'
You are not a perfect writer. You have grammatical mistakes. They don't take away from the story or hinder my understanding of its meaning. Pointing out the errors is rude and disrespectful. "People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones."
You meant "sound of her name." "Out" isn't grammatically correct.
10-year-old, not 10 year old.
You need a comma after "by" before the quote.
Again, you need a comma after "said" before the quote.
The comma after "up" is not necessary.
You are missing a comma after "later."
reddish-brown, not reddish brown.
A comma after "windows."
You don't need the word "that" between 'library' and 'you.'
You are not a perfect writer. You have grammatical mistakes. They don't take away from the story or hinder my understanding of its meaning. Pointing out the errors is rude and disrespectful. "People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones."
2/1/2022 c1 41Rico Perrien
There has got to be more of this story. As the guy at the sushi bar said, 'I am sitting here with bait on my breath'.
By the way, thanks for your reviews.
41Rico PerrienThere has got to be more of this story. As the guy at the sushi bar said, 'I am sitting here with bait on my breath'.
By the way, thanks for your reviews.
8/23/2021 c1 51Gottahavemyncis
This is wonderful and now I want more, please? I love the imagery! Kudos!
51GottahavemyncisThis is wonderful and now I want more, please? I love the imagery! Kudos!
7/10/2021 c1 19RobSt
Talking to a horse in a hoarse whisper is genius, and certainly something I would ‘borrow’ if I had a similar situation
Robert
19RobStTalking to a horse in a hoarse whisper is genius, and certainly something I would ‘borrow’ if I had a similar situation
Robert
7/8/2021 c1 noreenklose
Johannesburg, South Africa? ? ?
Isn't gender flipping enough change for you?
Sorry, I cannot buy it.
Harriet Potter-no thanks.
Johannesburg, South Africa- WAY TOO FAR AWAY from canon for my comfort. Heaven forbid that Moldyshorts wants to take over a continent instead of an island nation. ;-))
I wish you luck with your new job.
Johannesburg, South Africa? ? ?
Isn't gender flipping enough change for you?
Sorry, I cannot buy it.
Harriet Potter-no thanks.
Johannesburg, South Africa- WAY TOO FAR AWAY from canon for my comfort. Heaven forbid that Moldyshorts wants to take over a continent instead of an island nation. ;-))
I wish you luck with your new job.
7/8/2021 c1 12The Ghostly Minion
MV,
I think this is a fun story!. I’m certain it all turns out right!
TGM
12The Ghostly MinionMV,
I think this is a fun story!. I’m certain it all turns out right!
TGM