for Harry Potter and The Fractured Veil6/28 c1 Guest
WARNING This fic contains graphic depictions of incredibly disturbing things. Also the pov character is a psychopath.
Why were there no trigger warnings? Fleur alone is enough to turn a lot of ppl off. There should have been proper warnings.
This is a Dead Dove Do Not Eat level of disturbing.
WARNING This fic contains graphic depictions of incredibly disturbing things. Also the pov character is a psychopath.
Why were there no trigger warnings? Fleur alone is enough to turn a lot of ppl off. There should have been proper warnings.
This is a Dead Dove Do Not Eat level of disturbing.
2/2 c2 Guest
You are such a wannabe writter, all of your ffs are proof of it. Instead of trying to write a good fic, you want to write a ff which you make sure come accross different or cool but fails miserably as they are boring to read and they don't connect with you. Such try hard attempt. All of your ffs are like that.
You are such a wannabe writter, all of your ffs are proof of it. Instead of trying to write a good fic, you want to write a ff which you make sure come accross different or cool but fails miserably as they are boring to read and they don't connect with you. Such try hard attempt. All of your ffs are like that.
7/15/2021 c1 SomeGuyFawkes
Strange that I'd just rewatched "Battle Royale" a few days ago..
I dub this fic: "Harry potter into the sometimes coherent Potterverse".
Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.
Obviously, Amarinth (who can't even spell his own name with foolish consistency) does not really want to "die". Otherwise, he'd play lab rat more and fight back less.
And since you didn't use any diacritics, "Amaranth Sentire" translates to "Tastes (a particular variety of pseudo grain)" - meaning he's a snooty vegetarian and his natural nemesis is a beer-swillin', pork chop chompin', Good Ol' Boy.
›› "... put a wand in my hand and I'm useless."
Isn't this the same creature that transformed his body into a bunch of wand-equivalents?
Strange that I'd just rewatched "Battle Royale" a few days ago..
I dub this fic: "Harry potter into the sometimes coherent Potterverse".
Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.
Obviously, Amarinth (who can't even spell his own name with foolish consistency) does not really want to "die". Otherwise, he'd play lab rat more and fight back less.
And since you didn't use any diacritics, "Amaranth Sentire" translates to "Tastes (a particular variety of pseudo grain)" - meaning he's a snooty vegetarian and his natural nemesis is a beer-swillin', pork chop chompin', Good Ol' Boy.
›› "... put a wand in my hand and I'm useless."
Isn't this the same creature that transformed his body into a bunch of wand-equivalents?
7/14/2021 c1 
1HorusRa
Awesome... Very detailed, and giving enough clues to the diferent source universes You Created, But the Necromancer Hermione- and Vamipress Harry, would Need a mini Fic of the new Universe where their joined Souls arrived ti merge to their counterparts
1HorusRaAwesome... Very detailed, and giving enough clues to the diferent source universes You Created, But the Necromancer Hermione- and Vamipress Harry, would Need a mini Fic of the new Universe where their joined Souls arrived ti merge to their counterparts
7/13/2021 c1 Jostanos
I vote for Shoggoth. After all he is the first incarnation of "Harry" that we "meet" in this chapter. :)
I vote for Shoggoth. After all he is the first incarnation of "Harry" that we "meet" in this chapter. :)