for The Boy in the Cupboard4/29 c3 
3alix33
Alice slipping Remus a photograph of Neville was heartbreaking to read.
I hope somebody, anybody teaches Ron Weasley to be less misogynistic at some point quite soon.
3alix33Alice slipping Remus a photograph of Neville was heartbreaking to read.
I hope somebody, anybody teaches Ron Weasley to be less misogynistic at some point quite soon.
4/29 c2 alix33
I agree with Sirius: even if Harry could attend Hogwarts at some point in the future, I emphatically don't want him to.
I knew those dreadful Dursleys exposed Harry to Marge Dursley's bulldogs and I feel like growling like an angry dog of another breed, I am so livid at learning they did that.
I agree with Sirius: even if Harry could attend Hogwarts at some point in the future, I emphatically don't want him to.
I knew those dreadful Dursleys exposed Harry to Marge Dursley's bulldogs and I feel like growling like an angry dog of another breed, I am so livid at learning they did that.
4/29 c1 alix33
What did Alastor Moody bundle Harry up in?
I am distraught at learning about Alice starting to hum lullabies.
IMO Dumbles was not nearly contrite enough about Sirius having been imprisoned in Azkaban for so many years without a trial.
What did Alastor Moody bundle Harry up in?
I am distraught at learning about Alice starting to hum lullabies.
IMO Dumbles was not nearly contrite enough about Sirius having been imprisoned in Azkaban for so many years without a trial.
4/29 c16 N. A. Wennerholm
When I think about this story it just prices that Slbus Fumbkedire should not be an ant business in the placing of children and that he should never be given any kind of guardianship or authority over children. He disregards the concerns of others. It's a shame they don't have a time travel device powerful enough to go back and undo all of Albus's screw-ups, especially those concerning Harry and Sirius.
When I think about this story it just prices that Slbus Fumbkedire should not be an ant business in the placing of children and that he should never be given any kind of guardianship or authority over children. He disregards the concerns of others. It's a shame they don't have a time travel device powerful enough to go back and undo all of Albus's screw-ups, especially those concerning Harry and Sirius.
4/29 c16 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading ehat happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading ehat happens in your next chapter.
4/29 c16 4lizyeh2000
Thanks for updating! It’s been awhile, it will be interesting to see poeples reactions when he gets his name pulled
4lizyeh2000Thanks for updating! It’s been awhile, it will be interesting to see poeples reactions when he gets his name pulled
6/23/2022 c15 xanath
Hope you think of an ending for this.
Hope you think of an ending for this.
4/10/2022 c4 TwistingHope
Also reread this, because why not? And I still stand by saying this is one of the most tender, precious, and heartfelt stories I've read. Everything about this was absolutely beautiful and well written, and stories like these are what I like to read the most :') thanks for writing this.
Also reread this, because why not? And I still stand by saying this is one of the most tender, precious, and heartfelt stories I've read. Everything about this was absolutely beautiful and well written, and stories like these are what I like to read the most :') thanks for writing this.
4/1/2022 c2 SageAdvice
You did write / mention it. "You can't leave Harry be raised by a house elf."
Also, now that I'm two chapters in... this is a bad way to tell a story. It's all summary with only a sentence or two of dialogue. There's no characterization. There's no building of a plot, suspense, or even belief. There's literally no engaging parts to draw the reader in or any genuine enjoyment to the story. It's all just 'here's some words, read them'. There's no draw to the story at all, past the initial summary.
I am a voracious reader and even I'm not interested in reading any more of this, which is saying something. I mean... I've read Worm, RWBY, Buffy the VS, Avengers, DC, Marvel, Harry Potter, Star Wars, Star Trek (all versions), and even Winx and My Little Pony crossovers with everything else... and I don't want to read this.
You did write / mention it. "You can't leave Harry be raised by a house elf."
Also, now that I'm two chapters in... this is a bad way to tell a story. It's all summary with only a sentence or two of dialogue. There's no characterization. There's no building of a plot, suspense, or even belief. There's literally no engaging parts to draw the reader in or any genuine enjoyment to the story. It's all just 'here's some words, read them'. There's no draw to the story at all, past the initial summary.
I am a voracious reader and even I'm not interested in reading any more of this, which is saying something. I mean... I've read Worm, RWBY, Buffy the VS, Avengers, DC, Marvel, Harry Potter, Star Wars, Star Trek (all versions), and even Winx and My Little Pony crossovers with everything else... and I don't want to read this.
1/16/2022 c15 Jostanos
Oh shards.. It's worse than we thought. Harry may have to see a Mind Healer or a Mundane Therapist for what has happened so far in his life, but that may not happen. It may not even be thought of.
Or was it? *sighs* It has been far too long since I have read these chapters so I am not sure if the topic was even mentioned previously or not.
Anyway.. Let's see what the future may bring! *eye smiles*
Oh shards.. It's worse than we thought. Harry may have to see a Mind Healer or a Mundane Therapist for what has happened so far in his life, but that may not happen. It may not even be thought of.
Or was it? *sighs* It has been far too long since I have read these chapters so I am not sure if the topic was even mentioned previously or not.
Anyway.. Let's see what the future may bring! *eye smiles*
12/16/2021 c10 Carlisle
AHHHH
THE FACT THAT THIS STORY IS CLEARLY STILL THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS AND LITERALLY EVERYONE IS STILL IN CHARACTER IS JUST BLOWING MY MIND
ALSO THE FACT THAT HARRY BEING RECKLESS IS WHAT MADE EVERY BOOK MORE DRAMATIC AND SINCE HE'S LESS RECKLESS NOW LESS THINGS ARE GOING WRONG IS JUST SO FUNNY I CANT BELIEVE IT XDDD
AHHHH
THE FACT THAT THIS STORY IS CLEARLY STILL THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS AND LITERALLY EVERYONE IS STILL IN CHARACTER IS JUST BLOWING MY MIND
ALSO THE FACT THAT HARRY BEING RECKLESS IS WHAT MADE EVERY BOOK MORE DRAMATIC AND SINCE HE'S LESS RECKLESS NOW LESS THINGS ARE GOING WRONG IS JUST SO FUNNY I CANT BELIEVE IT XDDD
12/16/2021 c4 Carlisle
I never knew I needed Harry Potter dressed up as Max from Where The Wild Things Are, but I did and he is fantastic 3
I never knew I needed Harry Potter dressed up as Max from Where The Wild Things Are, but I did and he is fantastic 3