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1L0ot 09
Wow, nice fic. Interesting take on the Harry Potter franchise looking forward to seeing more chapters
1L0ot 09Wow, nice fic. Interesting take on the Harry Potter franchise looking forward to seeing more chapters
8/23 c2 aktcyhbmm
"haremthis has become a joke.
do you people who use this word have my idea what does it mean to people?women who had to face ithad to become slaves; sex slaveswho didn't just suffer total disregard of having basic human rights, they had to face violancehumiliationhelplessnessthis forms of life or death. they suffered for hundreds of years because of cruel religious men.
it didn't stop, it is still happening and now they are targeting younger generation by making this word famous by showing it being used in every famous anime nd shows! people are being brainwashed.
in a way everyone who are using this word like it is isme cool word is helpingthis cruel religion who follows this horror and "people" who wants this horror to continue.
"haremthis has become a joke.
do you people who use this word have my idea what does it mean to people?women who had to face ithad to become slaves; sex slaveswho didn't just suffer total disregard of having basic human rights, they had to face violancehumiliationhelplessnessthis forms of life or death. they suffered for hundreds of years because of cruel religious men.
it didn't stop, it is still happening and now they are targeting younger generation by making this word famous by showing it being used in every famous anime nd shows! people are being brainwashed.
in a way everyone who are using this word like it is isme cool word is helpingthis cruel religion who follows this horror and "people" who wants this horror to continue.
8/20 c13 Guest
Okay - krav maga is a martial art - based in the Middle East ,- Israel, to be specific. (I know of it because there is a dojo based in Washington, DC.). If you follow the DC Universe, Bruce Wayne learned it , and teaches it to his mentees. Ra'as and Talia al Ghoul learned it as well, as has Lady Shiva.
Okay - krav maga is a martial art - based in the Middle East ,- Israel, to be specific. (I know of it because there is a dojo based in Washington, DC.). If you follow the DC Universe, Bruce Wayne learned it , and teaches it to his mentees. Ra'as and Talia al Ghoul learned it as well, as has Lady Shiva.
8/19 c11 Aiden Britton
You need someone to proof read this rlly bad
You need someone to proof read this rlly bad
8/16 c25 5RT89
LOVED this chapter . I abhor that damn toad women and praise all that strike at her, with avations for those who do so in a courtroom. Bravo maxima!
5RT89LOVED this chapter . I abhor that damn toad women and praise all that strike at her, with avations for those who do so in a courtroom. Bravo maxima!
8/7 c72 Guest
Just wondering! Know you have been busy, but is this story still a part of the updates?
Just wondering! Know you have been busy, but is this story still a part of the updates?
7/30 c72 Unspeakable ASW
It has been a while since this story was updated. I don't mind waiting as I greatly enjoy the story but perhaps you could make a statement of sort to let us know if you plan to continue it or if its abandoned for the time being.
/ASW
It has been a while since this story was updated. I don't mind waiting as I greatly enjoy the story but perhaps you could make a statement of sort to let us know if you plan to continue it or if its abandoned for the time being.
/ASW
7/23 c19 11Stiltskin the Story Teller
Also, umbrage means ager or discontent over a percieved offense, so...
11Stiltskin the Story TellerAlso, umbrage means ager or discontent over a percieved offense, so...