for The Rise of the Last Potter6/20 c34 FunDoctor
Great chapter, once again.. uh.. til I saw the author's note.
You said: WHAT'S THE POINT OF THE 4TH YEAR IF HARRY ISN'T IN THE TRI WIZ TOURNEY?
Really?! You're an author. In 1 minute I bet you could personally invent quite(not QUIET, lol) a few scenarios with alternate plots. You seem to like to intellectually bash anything you don't agree with so let's put you in your place.
Your English grammar is pathetic and you speak in a myriad of redundancies that muddy up your descriptions. Try being polite to people who enjoy your imagination, beings as we must often use ours to pick thru the grammatical calculus that you seem to have failed.
After the way you changed Quidditch W.C., it's obvious to me and your other readers that you're more than capable of coming up with more than how the Goblet of Fire went down.. I, honestly, don't care, either way.. I'm here for a story, not an English lesson, but you could apparently use one... good day..
Great chapter, once again.. uh.. til I saw the author's note.
You said: WHAT'S THE POINT OF THE 4TH YEAR IF HARRY ISN'T IN THE TRI WIZ TOURNEY?
Really?! You're an author. In 1 minute I bet you could personally invent quite(not QUIET, lol) a few scenarios with alternate plots. You seem to like to intellectually bash anything you don't agree with so let's put you in your place.
Your English grammar is pathetic and you speak in a myriad of redundancies that muddy up your descriptions. Try being polite to people who enjoy your imagination, beings as we must often use ours to pick thru the grammatical calculus that you seem to have failed.
After the way you changed Quidditch W.C., it's obvious to me and your other readers that you're more than capable of coming up with more than how the Goblet of Fire went down.. I, honestly, don't care, either way.. I'm here for a story, not an English lesson, but you could apparently use one... good day..
6/20 c32 FunDoctor
Wow... I was going to ask.. why lionheart? Weird name..
Then.. you said FANGS, which was awesome and totally fits the way they name themselves..
Honestly, I'm disappointed that you strayed from such a perfect name.
If you ever rewrite this and fix all the grammatical errors, please, do this story justice and switch it to FANGS, too.
That's do much cooler.. anyway, great chapter but had to comment on the author's notes..
Wow... I was going to ask.. why lionheart? Weird name..
Then.. you said FANGS, which was awesome and totally fits the way they name themselves..
Honestly, I'm disappointed that you strayed from such a perfect name.
If you ever rewrite this and fix all the grammatical errors, please, do this story justice and switch it to FANGS, too.
That's do much cooler.. anyway, great chapter but had to comment on the author's notes..
6/20 c30 FunDoctor
I am officially recomplimentung you on THE RELATIONSHIP THING..
Also, nice intro for Fleur.. I love this stuff.
I am officially recomplimentung you on THE RELATIONSHIP THING..
Also, nice intro for Fleur.. I love this stuff.
6/20 c25 FunDoctor
Yes! Finally, an author who shuts Umbridge down right off the bat. THIS is how a writer treats Umbridge..
The cunt is barely worth a footnote...
Congratulations are in order!
Brava! :)
Yes! Finally, an author who shuts Umbridge down right off the bat. THIS is how a writer treats Umbridge..
The cunt is barely worth a footnote...
Congratulations are in order!
Brava! :)
6/19 c12 FunDoctor
I'm loving this, so far.. hoped to see Ginny on that list. I don't care whether she gets with Harry, but It's always bothered me that they aren't permanently pals-for-life after C O.S.
They both deserve this fierce and loyal friendship. Especially once she confronts Harry about what possession actually entails. She remains the most traumatized student who has somehow overcome her inner bastard... prolific? Fierce? Kick your fuckin ass? YES, YES AND HELL FUCKIN YEAH!
Alright, rant over.. luv u.. pass it on.. ;)
I'm loving this, so far.. hoped to see Ginny on that list. I don't care whether she gets with Harry, but It's always bothered me that they aren't permanently pals-for-life after C O.S.
They both deserve this fierce and loyal friendship. Especially once she confronts Harry about what possession actually entails. She remains the most traumatized student who has somehow overcome her inner bastard... prolific? Fierce? Kick your fuckin ass? YES, YES AND HELL FUCKIN YEAH!
Alright, rant over.. luv u.. pass it on.. ;)
6/17 c12 Baz62
Not sure why people don't understand about Harry telling about his wands. I'd like to see Neville with Hermione. Luna too flighty for him and Ginny immature.
Not sure why people don't understand about Harry telling about his wands. I'd like to see Neville with Hermione. Luna too flighty for him and Ginny immature.
6/17 c10 Baz62
Really don't like the supposed 'golden trio's. Ron was lazy, jealous and bigoted and only interested in quidditch and chess. Never understood how people kept thinking he and Hermione were so suited. He was lazy and she was driven
Really don't like the supposed 'golden trio's. Ron was lazy, jealous and bigoted and only interested in quidditch and chess. Never understood how people kept thinking he and Hermione were so suited. He was lazy and she was driven
6/18 c38 PrimalWhiteStar
soo... i waited for a Ron scene... nothing? will he remain the best friend of Harry? or the jealousy bout will come later?
soo... i waited for a Ron scene... nothing? will he remain the best friend of Harry? or the jealousy bout will come later?
6/18 c1 SusanAndy
The Rise of the Last Potter I truly enjoyed the story it was absolutely fantastic! The plot was engaging and well written, There's something really captivating about their personality and role in the story.
The Rise of the Last Potter I truly enjoyed the story it was absolutely fantastic! The plot was engaging and well written, There's something really captivating about their personality and role in the story.
6/18 c17 PrimalWhiteStar
hope for a Liger (a mix of Lion and Tiger)
or a Sabertooth Tiger
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...never heard of one choosing a Dinosaur as an Animagus... sooo... a Velociraptor?
hope for a Liger (a mix of Lion and Tiger)
or a Sabertooth Tiger
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...never heard of one choosing a Dinosaur as an Animagus... sooo... a Velociraptor?
5/25 c62 Blue1110
bro gave us 62 chapters on the first year, and then 25 chapters on the last 2 1/2 lol
bro gave us 62 chapters on the first year, and then 25 chapters on the last 2 1/2 lol
25/24 c75 YUNG 9 TAIL
so in one chapter harry can fight voldi to a stand still but in this chapter he gets schooled by Grendiwald make it make sense
so in one chapter harry can fight voldi to a stand still but in this chapter he gets schooled by Grendiwald make it make sense