
5/26/2022 c1 Guest
Add Lint Sellze, Latia Astaroth, Roygun Belphegor, older Kunou, and fem Vali to Issei harem.
Add Lint Sellze, Latia Astaroth, Roygun Belphegor, older Kunou, and fem Vali to Issei harem.
2/11/2022 c1 Guest
Excellent story please continue
Excellent story please continue
8/5/2021 c1 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
8/3/2021 c1 Hebb6919
Good start and I really enjoy reading it , looking forward to the next chapter .
Good start and I really enjoy reading it , looking forward to the next chapter .
7/23/2021 c1
5KaliYugaFan
Grammar and spelling needs some work, but that’s really about it. Dialogue is fine, which is to say it’s awkward as fuck, but that’s fine because they’re two virgin teenagers; of course it’s going to be awkward. I think if you pace yourself with chapter length/update schedule and fix some of those pesky spelling errors, you’ll have a really solid story on your hands.

Grammar and spelling needs some work, but that’s really about it. Dialogue is fine, which is to say it’s awkward as fuck, but that’s fine because they’re two virgin teenagers; of course it’s going to be awkward. I think if you pace yourself with chapter length/update schedule and fix some of those pesky spelling errors, you’ll have a really solid story on your hands.
7/20/2021 c1 Wolfx88
Awesome chapter I hope that Sona is part of the Harem
Saji has two girls pining for him(Momo And Haruko) anyway
And I hope you don't turned it into that mess of Fic HxH by Aren whatever his name is
Awesome chapter I hope that Sona is part of the Harem
Saji has two girls pining for him(Momo And Haruko) anyway
And I hope you don't turned it into that mess of Fic HxH by Aren whatever his name is
7/20/2021 c1 Guest
I like this story already! Really looking forward to the next chapter.
I like this story already! Really looking forward to the next chapter.
7/20/2021 c1 Guest
Well done.
Well done.