for Girlfriend Auction7/24/2021 c1 
9Evertide
You just keep nailing the hunies' characterizations in these short bits.
I too am a stickler for timing, so I empathize with Tiffany here. "Calm blue ocean." That got a good laugh out of me. I too have wondered sometimes how she stays so comparatively normal, given the people around her.
Then Ashley looking at the dress, gee, I wonder what modifications she'll make that will take less than a minute. Adding the guitar was a nice touch.
A few things: Ashley's last name is spelled with two r's, and yeah I only know that from reading the wiki. "Let' meet." I know Ashley's not in the character tags yet, but I think you have a wrong character there, and missing Tiffany. And I think you maybe mean Rembrite if she got that dress from Lola.
The only thing I could imagine Ashley doing that would curl Tiffany's hair even more is try to make small talk with her, given what she likes to talk about.
9EvertideYou just keep nailing the hunies' characterizations in these short bits.
I too am a stickler for timing, so I empathize with Tiffany here. "Calm blue ocean." That got a good laugh out of me. I too have wondered sometimes how she stays so comparatively normal, given the people around her.
Then Ashley looking at the dress, gee, I wonder what modifications she'll make that will take less than a minute. Adding the guitar was a nice touch.
A few things: Ashley's last name is spelled with two r's, and yeah I only know that from reading the wiki. "Let' meet." I know Ashley's not in the character tags yet, but I think you have a wrong character there, and missing Tiffany. And I think you maybe mean Rembrite if she got that dress from Lola.
The only thing I could imagine Ashley doing that would curl Tiffany's hair even more is try to make small talk with her, given what she likes to talk about.
7/20/2021 c1 17Cypher DS
Nice. You've got Ashley's posh stoner vibe down to a tee. (I dig how Tiffany is so puzzled by her British accent. Is Ash from Minnesota or some other super-bland state?) I did have to look up the shark bite dress to figure out what Ash was wearing. Curse me for being behind on meme fashion!
I didn't laugh quite so hard as your Lailani and Lillian pieces but you figured out a perfect dynamic between perfectly organized Tiffany and Ashley's rebel rocker. Loved her final line.
17Cypher DSNice. You've got Ashley's posh stoner vibe down to a tee. (I dig how Tiffany is so puzzled by her British accent. Is Ash from Minnesota or some other super-bland state?) I did have to look up the shark bite dress to figure out what Ash was wearing. Curse me for being behind on meme fashion!
I didn't laugh quite so hard as your Lailani and Lillian pieces but you figured out a perfect dynamic between perfectly organized Tiffany and Ashley's rebel rocker. Loved her final line.