for The Quirky Tutor4/14 c2 realfan16
hmmm the plot has definitely gone awry with many characters so out of their expected circumstances it's all good but having Naruto intruding on private moments just feels forced to me...tho obviously the remark is coming in late, let's see how the rest goes
hmmm the plot has definitely gone awry with many characters so out of their expected circumstances it's all good but having Naruto intruding on private moments just feels forced to me...tho obviously the remark is coming in late, let's see how the rest goes
3/17 c1 realfan16
i loke the plot idea, for once that it's not a kid shinobi that will attend U.A but what i cannot believe is the SFX (sound effects) TT_TT i DID NOT just read GRAB! GRAB! ? WHY? T_T
i loke the plot idea, for once that it's not a kid shinobi that will attend U.A but what i cannot believe is the SFX (sound effects) TT_TT i DID NOT just read GRAB! GRAB! ? WHY? T_T
1/25 c16 Illuminated2
I have been binging your story for the past few days, I really liked everything, it is making me interested in actually reading or watching MHA. I hope you continue to find inspiration to continue the story some day. Thanks for all your work!
I have been binging your story for the past few days, I really liked everything, it is making me interested in actually reading or watching MHA. I hope you continue to find inspiration to continue the story some day. Thanks for all your work!
10/19/2024 c16 TheGoodDoctor13
Well aside from my issues with naruto smurfing around this is fairly good, wish there was more of it but it is what it is
Well aside from my issues with naruto smurfing around this is fairly good, wish there was more of it but it is what it is
10/19/2024 c13 TheGoodDoctor13
Why didn't Naruto just blitz the nomu, or even shigaraki or kurogiri? This is 4th Shino war Naruto, he can literally one shot all 3 of them with a mini rasengan if he wanted to. But he's holding back the entire time, even when his adopted little sister is nearly killed he just dicks around using no jutsu or anything meaningful to end the fight. He even stood around and let kurogiri tp away with tomura after he got shot when Naruto is fast enough to punch him away 100 times before that mist even covers them. If your Naruto was weakened from dimension travel somehow I'd understand but there's no mention of that anywhere, this is literally just a full powered post war Naruto and he's fighting like a scrub
Why didn't Naruto just blitz the nomu, or even shigaraki or kurogiri? This is 4th Shino war Naruto, he can literally one shot all 3 of them with a mini rasengan if he wanted to. But he's holding back the entire time, even when his adopted little sister is nearly killed he just dicks around using no jutsu or anything meaningful to end the fight. He even stood around and let kurogiri tp away with tomura after he got shot when Naruto is fast enough to punch him away 100 times before that mist even covers them. If your Naruto was weakened from dimension travel somehow I'd understand but there's no mention of that anywhere, this is literally just a full powered post war Naruto and he's fighting like a scrub
10/19/2024 c1 TheGoodDoctor13
I gotta wonder, how come naruto hasn't healed all mights stomach? This is naruto that got shoved into the mha verse in the middle of fighting kaguya, so he still has his six paths chakra and mark. They're best friends too so it makes sense to heal that for him
I gotta wonder, how come naruto hasn't healed all mights stomach? This is naruto that got shoved into the mha verse in the middle of fighting kaguya, so he still has his six paths chakra and mark. They're best friends too so it makes sense to heal that for him
8/20/2024 c3 Gilgamesh50
Also even if the boys are in the dojo its just too much of a trope to have all the characters that are somewhat or just are relevent in our mcs dojo
The concept is dumb
Also even if the boys are in the dojo its just too much of a trope to have all the characters that are somewhat or just are relevent in our mcs dojo
The concept is dumb
8/20/2024 c3 Gilgamesh50
Im getting tired but why is every girl in the show in narutos dojo?
Like if that is the case where are the boys?
I would asume the boys would be the first to join ley alone the girls even as much as i dont like him i wouldve expected izuku to be there already not later cuz why cant he hear of the dojo and go but the girls can?
Bro is you tryna create a harem with all underage girls or summ? I hope not
Im just pointing out crazy plotholes and mistakes in my eye
Im getting tired but why is every girl in the show in narutos dojo?
Like if that is the case where are the boys?
I would asume the boys would be the first to join ley alone the girls even as much as i dont like him i wouldve expected izuku to be there already not later cuz why cant he hear of the dojo and go but the girls can?
Bro is you tryna create a harem with all underage girls or summ? I hope not
Im just pointing out crazy plotholes and mistakes in my eye
8/20/2024 c2 Gilgamesh50
Dont want to make it a complaint series but am i the only one who feels like naruto or the author is doing his best to keep naruto close to the situations izuku is involved in
Like why go after almight and izuku ?
Its not like almight is gonna drop him or kill him?
Like come on bro
Yeah keep his identity a secret or his weakness but still it still feels forced to me
Dont want to make it a complaint series but am i the only one who feels like naruto or the author is doing his best to keep naruto close to the situations izuku is involved in
Like why go after almight and izuku ?
Its not like almight is gonna drop him or kill him?
Like come on bro
Yeah keep his identity a secret or his weakness but still it still feels forced to me
8/20/2024 c2 Gilgamesh50
Dont take my words seriously if you dont want to (except for the underage review i left take that very seriously) since i am not the biggest Mha fan
I love the world i love the idea and a couple other charwcters but i HATE izuku i just cant even type it enough
Never liked him and o watched 3-4 seasons and stopped watching
And i started to write this review just as i saw naruto seeing izuku getting bullied . To say that i hope he doesnt -go help izuku out, make him more confident, more heroic, more skilled.- because every other mha fic already does that and has done it aoready
Like mha world will turn even if it isnt about izuku ya know?! Lol
Dont take my words seriously if you dont want to (except for the underage review i left take that very seriously) since i am not the biggest Mha fan
I love the world i love the idea and a couple other charwcters but i HATE izuku i just cant even type it enough
Never liked him and o watched 3-4 seasons and stopped watching
And i started to write this review just as i saw naruto seeing izuku getting bullied . To say that i hope he doesnt -go help izuku out, make him more confident, more heroic, more skilled.- because every other mha fic already does that and has done it aoready
Like mha world will turn even if it isnt about izuku ya know?! Lol