for The Quirky Tutor8/20 c3 Gilgamesh50
Also even if the boys are in the dojo its just too much of a trope to have all the characters that are somewhat or just are relevent in our mcs dojo
The concept is dumb
Also even if the boys are in the dojo its just too much of a trope to have all the characters that are somewhat or just are relevent in our mcs dojo
The concept is dumb
8/20 c3 Gilgamesh50
Im getting tired but why is every girl in the show in narutos dojo?
Like if that is the case where are the boys?
I would asume the boys would be the first to join ley alone the girls even as much as i dont like him i wouldve expected izuku to be there already not later cuz why cant he hear of the dojo and go but the girls can?
Bro is you tryna create a harem with all underage girls or summ? I hope not
Im just pointing out crazy plotholes and mistakes in my eye
Im getting tired but why is every girl in the show in narutos dojo?
Like if that is the case where are the boys?
I would asume the boys would be the first to join ley alone the girls even as much as i dont like him i wouldve expected izuku to be there already not later cuz why cant he hear of the dojo and go but the girls can?
Bro is you tryna create a harem with all underage girls or summ? I hope not
Im just pointing out crazy plotholes and mistakes in my eye
8/20 c2 Gilgamesh50
Dont want to make it a complaint series but am i the only one who feels like naruto or the author is doing his best to keep naruto close to the situations izuku is involved in
Like why go after almight and izuku ?
Its not like almight is gonna drop him or kill him?
Like come on bro
Yeah keep his identity a secret or his weakness but still it still feels forced to me
Dont want to make it a complaint series but am i the only one who feels like naruto or the author is doing his best to keep naruto close to the situations izuku is involved in
Like why go after almight and izuku ?
Its not like almight is gonna drop him or kill him?
Like come on bro
Yeah keep his identity a secret or his weakness but still it still feels forced to me
8/20 c2 Gilgamesh50
Dont take my words seriously if you dont want to (except for the underage review i left take that very seriously) since i am not the biggest Mha fan
I love the world i love the idea and a couple other charwcters but i HATE izuku i just cant even type it enough
Never liked him and o watched 3-4 seasons and stopped watching
And i started to write this review just as i saw naruto seeing izuku getting bullied . To say that i hope he doesnt -go help izuku out, make him more confident, more heroic, more skilled.- because every other mha fic already does that and has done it aoready
Like mha world will turn even if it isnt about izuku ya know?! Lol
Dont take my words seriously if you dont want to (except for the underage review i left take that very seriously) since i am not the biggest Mha fan
I love the world i love the idea and a couple other charwcters but i HATE izuku i just cant even type it enough
Never liked him and o watched 3-4 seasons and stopped watching
And i started to write this review just as i saw naruto seeing izuku getting bullied . To say that i hope he doesnt -go help izuku out, make him more confident, more heroic, more skilled.- because every other mha fic already does that and has done it aoready
Like mha world will turn even if it isnt about izuku ya know?! Lol
8/20 c1 Gilgamesh50
Stop the “16 is not illegal” or and “just take her already she likes you anyway” talk
I really cant stand those
Just no idc how much a gurl who is UNDERAGE wants to do it it wont and hsouldnt happen bro
Check yourself
Stop the “16 is not illegal” or and “just take her already she likes you anyway” talk
I really cant stand those
Just no idc how much a gurl who is UNDERAGE wants to do it it wont and hsouldnt happen bro
Check yourself
8/20 c1 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter
Just a question to any mha fan i guess, whatw ith the mina ashido hype? In almost any fic i see her. Me personally i dont really like her but thats me
Great Chapter
Just a question to any mha fan i guess, whatw ith the mina ashido hype? In almost any fic i see her. Me personally i dont really like her but thats me
8/13 c16 BrianShooter672
Just recently found this fiction, definitely got me interested and I'm looking forward for the more chapter in the Future.
1. Well for one, it's kinda sad that Naruto end up in this world alone except for Kurama. I do hope his friends or his family ends up in the same world as he is in the Future, maybe Hagamoro decided to bring back his parent's Minato and Kushina to help him out and afterward more of their friend's like Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi and the rest of their friends and allies.
Just recently found this fiction, definitely got me interested and I'm looking forward for the more chapter in the Future.
1. Well for one, it's kinda sad that Naruto end up in this world alone except for Kurama. I do hope his friends or his family ends up in the same world as he is in the Future, maybe Hagamoro decided to bring back his parent's Minato and Kushina to help him out and afterward more of their friend's like Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi and the rest of their friends and allies.
7/26 c16 selthar
Pirate bots huh? The only thing that could've been better would be pirate ninja bots... {:-)
Pirate bots huh? The only thing that could've been better would be pirate ninja bots... {:-)
7/25 c5 Scott Marshall1
I could just imagine aizawa just after being told that Naruto has killed plenty people in his own universeaizawa trying to arrest him for being a murdera in his own universe but Naruto would just trun around as say that aizawa was being a hippocratic coz we all no that aizawa had had to kill in the past
I could just imagine aizawa just after being told that Naruto has killed plenty people in his own universeaizawa trying to arrest him for being a murdera in his own universe but Naruto would just trun around as say that aizawa was being a hippocratic coz we all no that aizawa had had to kill in the past
7/16 c13 marquis.shax
so far you've made Naruto into an OC pussy. Yeah he's PHYSICALLY strong but that's all you've had him doing he's not using his shadow clone the rasengan or anything like that which makes this just an OC Naruto who you've made into a nerfed pussy
so far you've made Naruto into an OC pussy. Yeah he's PHYSICALLY strong but that's all you've had him doing he's not using his shadow clone the rasengan or anything like that which makes this just an OC Naruto who you've made into a nerfed pussy
7/13 c16 Pdd13
I dont know why but I got the image in my head of the final part of the obstacles having like say a robot Zabuza (weakened of course). Good chapter still!
I dont know why but I got the image in my head of the final part of the obstacles having like say a robot Zabuza (weakened of course). Good chapter still!