for Incense and Powdered Diamond3/26 c3 Guest
really disappointed in the story because of this addition of other deities... worm has enough of a story on it's own already, we don't need this xtra stuff.
really disappointed in the story because of this addition of other deities... worm has enough of a story on it's own already, we don't need this xtra stuff.
3/26 c2 Guest
Good premise but it suffers from what most fics like this do. If it was only taylor with this godly power messing around in the worm verse, that would have been great... instead you go and add other deities from other worlds, changing worm cannon.
Good premise but it suffers from what most fics like this do. If it was only taylor with this godly power messing around in the worm verse, that would have been great... instead you go and add other deities from other worlds, changing worm cannon.
2/27 c46 SeanHicks4
Interesting AU, the constant trigger warnings about Nazi vulgarity was annoying though. I don’t think I’ve ever seen a Nazi Gladly either, usually just a tryhard that wanted to be popular with the students either because he never got to be as a kid or because of Peter Pan syndrome. I kinda wish you’d redeemed Bonesaw too since she was only a murderhobo because of Stockholm syndrome
Interesting AU, the constant trigger warnings about Nazi vulgarity was annoying though. I don’t think I’ve ever seen a Nazi Gladly either, usually just a tryhard that wanted to be popular with the students either because he never got to be as a kid or because of Peter Pan syndrome. I kinda wish you’d redeemed Bonesaw too since she was only a murderhobo because of Stockholm syndrome
12/7/2024 c24 Robbler
Well, I question making the Empire a big threat because they just really aren't.
The power you gave the "gods" is pretty arbitrary, but it comes off as being far stronger than cape power (which they also have).
Ultimately what disappoints me is that it feels as if you weaken them when needed and then empower them again when it's time to end a situation. It makes all of this feel chaotic and unrealistic.
I hope I did not offend you with my words, I tend to sound harsh but never really mean to.
Well, I question making the Empire a big threat because they just really aren't.
The power you gave the "gods" is pretty arbitrary, but it comes off as being far stronger than cape power (which they also have).
Ultimately what disappoints me is that it feels as if you weaken them when needed and then empower them again when it's time to end a situation. It makes all of this feel chaotic and unrealistic.
I hope I did not offend you with my words, I tend to sound harsh but never really mean to.
12/7/2024 c21 Robbler
Stable, though the speed at which people just go with "Yeah sry, you're a god now" is offsetting.
Also: Please don't switch between first name and Cape name. It is confusing as hell.
Stable, though the speed at which people just go with "Yeah sry, you're a god now" is offsetting.
Also: Please don't switch between first name and Cape name. It is confusing as hell.
111/10/2024 c14 hmckay32
The writing is middling to ok. The concept is interesting, but the injection of politics is too heavy handed
The writing is middling to ok. The concept is interesting, but the injection of politics is too heavy handed
9/6/2024 c27 zmanjz
i love the concept that the crazy evil clone of a crazy evil person is actually a sane reasonable person. (i mean, it implies a number of horrible things about original sophia... but that seems legit)
i love the concept that the crazy evil clone of a crazy evil person is actually a sane reasonable person. (i mean, it implies a number of horrible things about original sophia... but that seems legit)