
11/4/2022 c21 guest
elle is pronounced L
MabEL.
elle looks and acts like mabel
is Elle Mabel
elle is pronounced L
MabEL.
elle looks and acts like mabel
is Elle Mabel
9/22/2021 c12 ThatOneGuest
Dang! This is so intense! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Dang! This is so intense! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
9/22/2021 c11 Guest
This is so cool. I don’t know much about death note, but I can’t wait to see what happens next!
This is so cool. I don’t know much about death note, but I can’t wait to see what happens next!
8/14/2021 c8 Atsuko
Me gusta la historia. No he visto death note pero se de que va. Pero me pregunto, donde está Mabel? Aparece en el futuro? Son hermanos?. Me gustaría saberlo antes de seguir la historia. Gracias por escribir!
Me gusta la historia. No he visto death note pero se de que va. Pero me pregunto, donde está Mabel? Aparece en el futuro? Son hermanos?. Me gustaría saberlo antes de seguir la historia. Gracias por escribir!
8/13/2021 c1 clayton
i kinda giessed bill would have something to do with the bokk i tought out of bordem mabye
i kinda giessed bill would have something to do with the bokk i tought out of bordem mabye
8/12/2021 c6 Maggie
“L knows more than you think” Ahhhh I genuinely think L is a bad guy. Like maybe a serial killer or something too. This is so good!
“L knows more than you think” Ahhhh I genuinely think L is a bad guy. Like maybe a serial killer or something too. This is so good!
8/7/2021 c5 Maggie
"Mason helps Stan lie" ohhhh what does this mean? Lie about what?! I'm hooked, lol. And geez, looks like Dipper may have just sank his own ship with the broadcast thing. Please continue! And thank you for the trophy!
"Mason helps Stan lie" ohhhh what does this mean? Lie about what?! I'm hooked, lol. And geez, looks like Dipper may have just sank his own ship with the broadcast thing. Please continue! And thank you for the trophy!
8/6/2021 c4 Maggie
“L was there when Mabel died” ahhh this is so good!
“L was there when Mabel died” ahhh this is so good!
8/2/2021 c2 owoah
Okay, so far; this has been a great read. I am excited to see the eventual reveal of (you know who) also, I would love to see your representation of it. You have Soos's personality down to a tee also, I was wondering if this is set in a world without the magical aspect of Gravity Falls?. I am really invested now since reading this chapter and would love to see more. But don't rush!. The future for this fic holds so many possible outcomes. Who is gonna be the main "antagonist"? (don't tell me hehe :3) okay, that's all from me! good luck with the fic and I hope writer's block never comes your way!
-owoah
Okay, so far; this has been a great read. I am excited to see the eventual reveal of (you know who) also, I would love to see your representation of it. You have Soos's personality down to a tee also, I was wondering if this is set in a world without the magical aspect of Gravity Falls?. I am really invested now since reading this chapter and would love to see more. But don't rush!. The future for this fic holds so many possible outcomes. Who is gonna be the main "antagonist"? (don't tell me hehe :3) okay, that's all from me! good luck with the fic and I hope writer's block never comes your way!
-owoah
7/30/2021 c1 Guest
It’s everything I ever wanted in a fanfiction ! Good Luck and Update Soon !
It’s everything I ever wanted in a fanfiction ! Good Luck and Update Soon !