for Jaune Arc: The birth of a Legend9/24/2024 c2 
1Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
“Yosh”? Using Aura to do elemental attacks out of nowhere? Yeah, you tried turning him into Lee/Guy and now are trying to use Aura like Chakra. I’m gonna drop this here while I love Naruto I don’t wanna read about someone copying their skills solely because he’s not using Aura with “common sense”. He wouldn’t be the first and if it was possible Ozpin or Salem would’ve known about it ages ago since Oz would want a reason to use magic without having to say that it’s magic. He’d surely train someone and try to have them use their Aura as if it were magic, thus freeing him to openly use magic when he has reason to.
I just couldn’t get behind this, sorry.
1Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd“Yosh”? Using Aura to do elemental attacks out of nowhere? Yeah, you tried turning him into Lee/Guy and now are trying to use Aura like Chakra. I’m gonna drop this here while I love Naruto I don’t wanna read about someone copying their skills solely because he’s not using Aura with “common sense”. He wouldn’t be the first and if it was possible Ozpin or Salem would’ve known about it ages ago since Oz would want a reason to use magic without having to say that it’s magic. He’d surely train someone and try to have them use their Aura as if it were magic, thus freeing him to openly use magic when he has reason to.
I just couldn’t get behind this, sorry.
8/8/2021 c2 TheGamingReader
Stop Here! You've done enough, legends are fought for. Wouldn't be that great a legend if he was too Overpowered. This is a great ending to power and the next two years should be experience gain.
Stop Here! You've done enough, legends are fought for. Wouldn't be that great a legend if he was too Overpowered. This is a great ending to power and the next two years should be experience gain.
8/7/2021 c1 Adhibros
I think the setting of the story could have been better if you decided to have Jaune experience a big loss to him and that loss was the spark for Jaune to snap and leave to train on his own. It's still a good first story so keep it up and keep the chapters coming!
I think the setting of the story could have been better if you decided to have Jaune experience a big loss to him and that loss was the spark for Jaune to snap and leave to train on his own. It's still a good first story so keep it up and keep the chapters coming!