12/27/2023 c3 Atena-Sanji-23
È molto bella questa storia non vedo ľ ora di leggere il prossimo capitolo!
È molto bella questa storia non vedo ľ ora di leggere il prossimo capitolo!
9/28/2023 c2 God of Wind 200
Add
Hinata
Ayame
Shion
Kurenai
Hana
Kin
Mabui
Samui
Mikoto
Flower village ninja that was after the toad sage student
And personally
I would have shipped
Anko with Kakashi
Add
Hinata
Ayame
Shion
Kurenai
Hana
Kin
Mabui
Samui
Mikoto
Flower village ninja that was after the toad sage student
And personally
I would have shipped
Anko with Kakashi
1/26/2022 c3 12FilthyCasual543
I hope you come back and update this. It’s already been a few months and this story is really good
I hope you come back and update this. It’s already been a few months and this story is really good
10/4/2021 c3 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Excellent work! Definitely going on my favs and follows list!
Excellent work! Definitely going on my favs and follows list!
10/4/2021 c2 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Awesome work! I’m loving this! I also approve of the harem so far as well. Although perhaps instead of Mikoto, maybe you could have Izumi take her place? Even though she was killed in the Massacre in canon, you didn’t specify EVERYONE who was killed in here, just that at least there were still 20-30 Uchiha minus Mikoto, Naruto, Itachi, and Satsuki left.
Awesome work! I’m loving this! I also approve of the harem so far as well. Although perhaps instead of Mikoto, maybe you could have Izumi take her place? Even though she was killed in the Massacre in canon, you didn’t specify EVERYONE who was killed in here, just that at least there were still 20-30 Uchiha minus Mikoto, Naruto, Itachi, and Satsuki left.
9/8/2021 c3 bastidaswilliam2005
yes to mikoto add yugao after her boyfriend is killed she need someone who look after her wink wink and hana for the pour gir wont be left out she its beautiful and add tsume for a hot mother-daughter threesome (since they alredy have the pack mentality so why not?)
yes to mikoto add yugao after her boyfriend is killed she need someone who look after her wink wink and hana for the pour gir wont be left out she its beautiful and add tsume for a hot mother-daughter threesome (since they alredy have the pack mentality so why not?)
8/21/2021 c3 Naruto009523
Good chapter the only thing I disagree with is how quick Haku went from hating his guts to jumping his bones. Its not realistic and yes I know this is fanfiction but it still happened way too fast. But other than that great chapter I hope the next chapter is posted soon I look forward to reading it. Also my choice for harem girls is Samui Karui Mabui Yugito Mei Terumi Fu Sakura Ino Hinata Temari Tenten Yugao Hana Inuzuka and Tsume Inuzuka and if you can somehow work them in Kushina and Tsunade. Maybe have Minato and Jiraiya die in the invasion?
Good chapter the only thing I disagree with is how quick Haku went from hating his guts to jumping his bones. Its not realistic and yes I know this is fanfiction but it still happened way too fast. But other than that great chapter I hope the next chapter is posted soon I look forward to reading it. Also my choice for harem girls is Samui Karui Mabui Yugito Mei Terumi Fu Sakura Ino Hinata Temari Tenten Yugao Hana Inuzuka and Tsume Inuzuka and if you can somehow work them in Kushina and Tsunade. Maybe have Minato and Jiraiya die in the invasion?
8/21/2021 c3 2biginferno
great chapter I see Temari will probably join the harem I hope Samui does as well and hopefully a strong Ino other than that maybe Shizune
great chapter I see Temari will probably join the harem I hope Samui does as well and hopefully a strong Ino other than that maybe Shizune
8/20/2021 c1 KickoUzumaki
Start of story- not good loads of details that just ruin it. This includes Indra being known to them when he wasn’t, also fugaku wasn’t related to madara and madara was cast out of the uchiha for his rebellion against hashirama
Start of story- not good loads of details that just ruin it. This includes Indra being known to them when he wasn’t, also fugaku wasn’t related to madara and madara was cast out of the uchiha for his rebellion against hashirama