for A Tale of Wings and Fangs16h c27 lexifrank221
Your story is truly captivating! The way you bring the characters and world to life is nothing short of brilliant. I was completely immersed in every moment feeling every emotion and I absolutely loved every bit of it
Your story is truly captivating! The way you bring the characters and world to life is nothing short of brilliant. I was completely immersed in every moment feeling every emotion and I absolutely loved every bit of it
5/5 c27 Jondarme
Still enjoyed the story, you did good work on it. Hope to hear something more from you in the future.
Still enjoyed the story, you did good work on it. Hope to hear something more from you in the future.
2/26 c8 Guest
The story would be a lot better if you didn't have a full 1/5 of the page being reviews before and after the chapter pretty stupid
The story would be a lot better if you didn't have a full 1/5 of the page being reviews before and after the chapter pretty stupid
2/8 c27 mumphie
Well, this is sad. I just discovered your story. it's really good, well woven, and intriguing. I hope that you get through your schooling and whatever new job you dream about. THEN, then I hope that you will remember your stories and ideas and come back. Just think about keeping your mojo on ice to keep it fresh!
Well, this is sad. I just discovered your story. it's really good, well woven, and intriguing. I hope that you get through your schooling and whatever new job you dream about. THEN, then I hope that you will remember your stories and ideas and come back. Just think about keeping your mojo on ice to keep it fresh!
2/8 c19 mumphie
I'd like Dumbles to answer what it actually is that Harry has to apologize to his friends for. What did he do? - I KNOW...nothing at all. Cannot understand Dumbles attitude, except that he want his plan to work, and it won't if Harry isn't where he wants him to be.
I'd like Dumbles to answer what it actually is that Harry has to apologize to his friends for. What did he do? - I KNOW...nothing at all. Cannot understand Dumbles attitude, except that he want his plan to work, and it won't if Harry isn't where he wants him to be.
2/8 c15 mumphie
Just a typo oops -
"...as the rules of the Tri-wizard Tournament stare..." - state
Loving the story!
Just a typo oops -
"...as the rules of the Tri-wizard Tournament stare..." - state
Loving the story!
2/8 c3 mumphie
I agree with you on Sirius. I always felt so bad for him in canon. Hi life was tragic. Too many people make him out to be a bad guy, and Snape good! Unbelievable.
But - Hogwarts starts at 11 years of age, not 12. If school starts at 13, then they will still be in school at 20! What is the age of maturity in your world?
"I don't need a want..." - wand
I agree with you on Sirius. I always felt so bad for him in canon. Hi life was tragic. Too many people make him out to be a bad guy, and Snape good! Unbelievable.
But - Hogwarts starts at 11 years of age, not 12. If school starts at 13, then they will still be in school at 20! What is the age of maturity in your world?
"I don't need a want..." - wand
1/12 c27 Brendonjack111
This is good hopefully you continue this story eventually because it was really enjoyable
This is good hopefully you continue this story eventually because it was really enjoyable
12/28/2024 c13 kyuubifire25
Just so you know the age of adulthood in the wizarding world is actually seventeen
Just so you know the age of adulthood in the wizarding world is actually seventeen