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13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Okay so Gabby will be Harry's, unless someone tries to be a moron/smart ass. Unless Gabby is still for Fleur and then maybe Neville for Harry? Either way somebody is going to get reemed for the second task.
13N7 Greek-ValkyrieOkay so Gabby will be Harry's, unless someone tries to be a moron/smart ass. Unless Gabby is still for Fleur and then maybe Neville for Harry? Either way somebody is going to get reemed for the second task.
1/27 c22 N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Okay that's twice I've spotted where something has happened and then in later chapters it's brought up again, but as if it's new information. 1st: during the Weighing of the Wands Ollivander mentioned Harry was Lord Potter, so Dumbledore knew about that since then. 2nd: After the first task Harry threatened/promised to create a Blood Feud with Minister Fudge, if he interfered with Amelia Bones doing her job to investigate Harry's claim of Sirius being innocent.
Okay that's twice I've spotted where something has happened and then in later chapters it's brought up again, but as if it's new information. 1st: during the Weighing of the Wands Ollivander mentioned Harry was Lord Potter, so Dumbledore knew about that since then. 2nd: After the first task Harry threatened/promised to create a Blood Feud with Minister Fudge, if he interfered with Amelia Bones doing her job to investigate Harry's claim of Sirius being innocent.
1/26 c26 pegm4n
I say this with no hesitation. This has been, by far, one of the better fics I've read. It is a creative take on the story, follows a solid storyline(especially with the changes from Canon), and is the perfect balance that keeps it entertaining but not pushing action to keep readers wanting to read. this has been a pleasure to read, and I look forward to further updates, and im even planning on keeping up with this till completion.
I say this with no hesitation. This has been, by far, one of the better fics I've read. It is a creative take on the story, follows a solid storyline(especially with the changes from Canon), and is the perfect balance that keeps it entertaining but not pushing action to keep readers wanting to read. this has been a pleasure to read, and I look forward to further updates, and im even planning on keeping up with this till completion.
1/21 c26 Guest
THIS IS SO GOOD!
Man you're doing great work!
THIS IS SO GOOD!
Man you're doing great work!
1/13 c22 6Lord Shiva
Man, this is retarded. I get you are trying to bash the characters, but at least do it in a way that doesn't make it so every character only has one working brain cell.
6Lord ShivaMan, this is retarded. I get you are trying to bash the characters, but at least do it in a way that doesn't make it so every character only has one working brain cell.
1/5 c18 ToddGilliss
Take your time
Do it right
Ginny and Hermione own Harry a life debt, take them out
Take your time
Do it right
Ginny and Hermione own Harry a life debt, take them out
12/15/2022 c2 Guest
The Animagus transformation does not include potions use.
The Animagus transformation does not include potions use.
12/12/2022 c22 18IAmOutOfIdeas
Another continuity issue. You have Harry not knowing what a blood feud is, but he threatened Fudge with one when defending Sirius after the first task
18IAmOutOfIdeasAnother continuity issue. You have Harry not knowing what a blood feud is, but he threatened Fudge with one when defending Sirius after the first task
12/12/2022 c20 IAmOutOfIdeas
Dumbledore learned about Harry being Lord Potter back during the weighing of the wands. While I enjoy the story, the poor continuity detracts from it. There was something else that was broke continuity, but I don’t remember what it was. Good story other than that
Dumbledore learned about Harry being Lord Potter back during the weighing of the wands. While I enjoy the story, the poor continuity detracts from it. There was something else that was broke continuity, but I don’t remember what it was. Good story other than that