for Deal with the Devil11h c25 desolate2024
This story keeps on getting better. the twists are well thought out and worth the wait. And every piece of revenge is satisfying. Keep ip the good work!
This story keeps on getting better. the twists are well thought out and worth the wait. And every piece of revenge is satisfying. Keep ip the good work!
6/13 c15 desolate2024
Genuinely have to say this is one of the better stories ive read in a minute. Super glad its a long one too! Grammar, pacing, story, lore, you keep it all balanced and interesting keep up the good work!
Genuinely have to say this is one of the better stories ive read in a minute. Super glad its a long one too! Grammar, pacing, story, lore, you keep it all balanced and interesting keep up the good work!
6/7 c15 
2Qriiz
Your twist your characters pretty hard to fit the plot.
Damien could have use 1 second to layer himself with an illusion before talking, hiding his power, not introducing himself, he could have wipe out everyone, he could have mind wipe them... there's countless way to protect his identity.
Is Rias' breast matter that much?
2QriizYour twist your characters pretty hard to fit the plot.
Damien could have use 1 second to layer himself with an illusion before talking, hiding his power, not introducing himself, he could have wipe out everyone, he could have mind wipe them... there's countless way to protect his identity.
Is Rias' breast matter that much?
5/8 c35 Guest
Love coming back to read this. Hope you return to this soon, though I know it's an exhausting one for you, it's still one of your best.
Love coming back to read this. Hope you return to this soon, though I know it's an exhausting one for you, it's still one of your best.
5/8 c8 Guest
Re-reading this story and I really love what you did in this chapter. It added a ton of complexity on all sides and was a beautifully executed twist. Kudos once again.
Re-reading this story and I really love what you did in this chapter. It added a ton of complexity on all sides and was a beautifully executed twist. Kudos once again.
4/27 c5 Guest
This is absolute garbage I prefer devils who honor their contract and give you what you want like your business deal
This is absolute garbage I prefer devils who honor their contract and give you what you want like your business deal
4/23 c35 Hunter1
When is the next chapter the last chapter was in June 2024 and now it's April 2025 it's been 9 almost 10 months since the last chapter
When is the next chapter the last chapter was in June 2024 and now it's April 2025 it's been 9 almost 10 months since the last chapter
4/4 c8 reader-kun
Holy shit mate! I rarely ever comment but I just had to after this one. This chapter just shot this story to the top of my list of best DxD fanfics ive read. I love the twist and the way you just made all the pieces click so beautifully xD
Thanks for sharing your writing with us mate and i look forward to seeing what more you have in plot!
Holy shit mate! I rarely ever comment but I just had to after this one. This chapter just shot this story to the top of my list of best DxD fanfics ive read. I love the twist and the way you just made all the pieces click so beautifully xD
Thanks for sharing your writing with us mate and i look forward to seeing what more you have in plot!
3/26 c33 Glitner
you really did Vasco Strada dirty! He's like the " Gandalf " from High School DxD he would never side with the opposing side. It felt so out of character for him that it didn’t fit. As a result, he just became a random original character in my mind when i read it all
you really did Vasco Strada dirty! He's like the " Gandalf " from High School DxD he would never side with the opposing side. It felt so out of character for him that it didn’t fit. As a result, he just became a random original character in my mind when i read it all
3/21 c3 Joe
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