for Deal with the Devil1/23 c23 Black
You've probably heard this a million times before but moooooorrreeeee pleaaaassseeeee!
You've probably heard this a million times before but moooooorrreeeee pleaaaassseeeee!
1/25 c5 StoneTheLoner
Oh goodie. I'm only a couple of paragraphs into this chapter and I can already tell my last review was completely accurate.
Oh goodie. I'm only a couple of paragraphs into this chapter and I can already tell my last review was completely accurate.
1/25 c4 StoneTheLoner
Let me guess, half of the next chapter will be him thinking about his training or actually training? I totally wouldn't expect that at this point. Nope. You know what we could also use? A hundred paragraphs on random crap like nobody character b is related to person c who is part of faction whatever tf.
It's not like anybody wants some actual story to happen, now do we?
Let me guess, half of the next chapter will be him thinking about his training or actually training? I totally wouldn't expect that at this point. Nope. You know what we could also use? A hundred paragraphs on random crap like nobody character b is related to person c who is part of faction whatever tf.
It's not like anybody wants some actual story to happen, now do we?
1/25 c3 StoneTheLoner
Why am I reading a wiki instead of a story most of the time? So you made notes and spent some time researching. Cool. But don't punish your readers with it. We don't need this amount of it.
Why am I reading a wiki instead of a story most of the time? So you made notes and spent some time researching. Cool. But don't punish your readers with it. We don't need this amount of it.
1/25 c2 StoneTheLoner
Dude... what the fck is up with the constant naruto or chakra or hokage references? This isn't Naruto. He doesn't have Naruto powers.
Dude... what the fck is up with the constant naruto or chakra or hokage references? This isn't Naruto. He doesn't have Naruto powers.
1/20 c23 Black
update
update
1/17 c23 Trevion1 Brownlee
This was another amazing chapter and it’s like the third time I reread this
This was another amazing chapter and it’s like the third time I reread this
1/13 c11 
3Huntsman331
"After all, have you seen people hating random strangers with all their beings?"
I have. Try League of Legends, you'll wish the most terrible deaths on your allies. I've seen people actually wishing their teammates got cancer or autism, it's a regular occurrence.
3Huntsman331"After all, have you seen people hating random strangers with all their beings?"
I have. Try League of Legends, you'll wish the most terrible deaths on your allies. I've seen people actually wishing their teammates got cancer or autism, it's a regular occurrence.