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8/23/2021 c2 Nameless Godless
I like how you handled the scene of him Improving his magic.

It being massively easy fits too a lack of challenge in the system is what created lazyass Devils.
8/23/2021 c2 DaddyAlastor
great chapter cant wait until the next one keep u[ the great work
8/22/2021 c2 AnimeA55Kicker
I like the fic so far, and the fact that there will be more real threats to the MC. And I'm always a big fem-Vali fan. Seeya next time.
8/22/2021 c2 Captainrex2345
Love it, please keep up the good work my man! :D
8/22/2021 c1 AnimeA55Kicker
Vali? Or fem Vali?
8/22/2021 c2 lastapril123
Yeah, screw canon! It's only bunch of plot armor with issei angry for goodness of boobs
8/22/2021 c2 akasuna123
Mc is a dumbass for not creating any spells for 6 years and doing nothing
8/22/2021 c1 akasuna123
He has essence of the mad doctor which should give him knowledge about all things magic unless it was nerfed
8/22/2021 c2 iKuroto
Thanks for the chapter!
Really interesting take on DxD!
Waiting anxiously for New chapters!
8/22/2021 c1 iKuroto
Thanks for the chapter!
Really wonderful beginning!
It's good to see a character born as a Devil!
8/22/2021 c2 Cosray8d
Awesome fic!
Him copying other peoples attitudes and abilities from other universes is awesome! (and hilarious with Sasukes "Hn!")
Hope reading more in the near future and at this point I even anticipate updated for this story more then your old one (Shin is a bit too OP right now and after the Hp-saga ended there isn't much for me to look forward to... only if you nerf Shin after he goes to another dimension)
8/22/2021 c2 4ntares
Hmm, never read an "essence" story before, this looks really interesting, can he recreate Accelerator's Vector Manipulation with this Archmage Essence? If he can he should really consider it, the things he would be able to do would be quite scary. I'm honestly highly hyped for more chapters
8/22/2021 c2 1bigbrownpanda
Great chapter looking forward to more
8/22/2021 c2 bigbrownpanda
Great chapter looking forward to more
8/22/2021 c1 bigbrownpanda
you said this will be darker I hope that doesn't mean ntr cuz if it does please inform us beforehand so we can drop
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