for Deal with the Devil3/4 c1 bdydvl
How does the extra lives work? If his body is annihilated, does he just reappear Somewhere ?
How does the extra lives work? If his body is annihilated, does he just reappear Somewhere ?
2/28 c35 Guest
Wow fantastic story but I need the next chapter is being more than 6 months. Please
Wow fantastic story but I need the next chapter is being more than 6 months. Please
2/24 c35 Lucifer-Satani
Right.
I need more.
Right fucking now. Now now. Please? Please? Pretty please? Super pretty Please?
I'm begging. I need to know what happens. I NEED it.
Please.
I'm even willing to make a Deal with the Devil to get another chapter.
I have to know what will happen when Damien touches Incinterate Anthem.
Right.
I need more.
Right fucking now. Now now. Please? Please? Pretty please? Super pretty Please?
I'm begging. I need to know what happens. I NEED it.
Please.
I'm even willing to make a Deal with the Devil to get another chapter.
I have to know what will happen when Damien touches Incinterate Anthem.
2/4 c8 gigamans57
So fucking ridiculous that everyone in this story is fucking 'Satan-class' the scaling is so ass. 10 year old girls who are NOT reincarnated are fucking 'High Ultimate Class' are you for real? If it was this easy to make retardedly strong people there would be legions more of them.
Stealing the sacred gears is also ass. At this rate with his meta-knowledge he'll be the strongest thing on the planet before canon starts. And just finding and handing out Longinus' takes away any sort of interest I have in them, it turns something cool into basically a spell you trade around.
So fucking ridiculous that everyone in this story is fucking 'Satan-class' the scaling is so ass. 10 year old girls who are NOT reincarnated are fucking 'High Ultimate Class' are you for real? If it was this easy to make retardedly strong people there would be legions more of them.
Stealing the sacred gears is also ass. At this rate with his meta-knowledge he'll be the strongest thing on the planet before canon starts. And just finding and handing out Longinus' takes away any sort of interest I have in them, it turns something cool into basically a spell you trade around.
2/4 c6 gigamans57
Really brilliant idea allowing her to call him 'Dummy', surely no problems will come from that.
This is slow as hell but I guess I do like it. Comparing this to your later stories and it's pretty obvious how much better you've gotten at writing. This character doesn't really come across as a person, and the 'Essences' or whatever are extremely broken.
Also if Aria is dead it's because he's fucking retarded while also somehow being a 'genius'. He didn't do it so that she'd be mentally independent but did do it to her daughter, who he also does not manipulate with the binder thing. So really he just didn't do it because plot?
Really brilliant idea allowing her to call him 'Dummy', surely no problems will come from that.
This is slow as hell but I guess I do like it. Comparing this to your later stories and it's pretty obvious how much better you've gotten at writing. This character doesn't really come across as a person, and the 'Essences' or whatever are extremely broken.
Also if Aria is dead it's because he's fucking retarded while also somehow being a 'genius'. He didn't do it so that she'd be mentally independent but did do it to her daughter, who he also does not manipulate with the binder thing. So really he just didn't do it because plot?
1/30 c35 
1OhJustReadIt
Wow damnnn, the story was a little hard to read around the start and the middle but it really picks up towards the end. Just wow!
Great writing, great ideas. You’re an absolutely amazing writer. I hope you decide to continue this.
1OhJustReadItWow damnnn, the story was a little hard to read around the start and the middle but it really picks up towards the end. Just wow!
Great writing, great ideas. You’re an absolutely amazing writer. I hope you decide to continue this.
1/20 c21 alphaprince0
I hope Damien finds a way to permanently merge his Devil side and Archangel side so he has the powers of both at all times. you could have half his wings be Devil wings and half his wings be Angel wings or have all his wings be a mixture of both
I hope Damien finds a way to permanently merge his Devil side and Archangel side so he has the powers of both at all times. you could have half his wings be Devil wings and half his wings be Angel wings or have all his wings be a mixture of both
1/19 c10 alphaprince0
he should collect all four of Vritra's Sacred Gears and some minorthen find a way to absorb their power to make them his own and improve his soul. their powers would synergize nicely with his own such as Blaze Black Flare working with his Passion Flame and Deletion Field working with his version of Worthless that he learned using Essence of Archmage.
he should collect all four of Vritra's Sacred Gears and some minorthen find a way to absorb their power to make them his own and improve his soul. their powers would synergize nicely with his own such as Blaze Black Flare working with his Passion Flame and Deletion Field working with his version of Worthless that he learned using Essence of Archmage.
1/18 c4 alphaprince0
he should try to use his Essence of Broker to gain several Sacred Gears and other special items such as Sephiroth Graal, Vritra's Sacred Gears, Boosted Gear, Dimension Lost, Excalibur Fragments, and a Grim Reaper's Death Scythe then either use them himself, give them to subordinates/allies, or trade them with others to gain stuff more suited for himself. he should also try to gain Clan Traits and other special abilities such as Ajuka's Kankara Formula, Belial Clan's Worthless, and Belphegor Clan's Crack since those would work best for him in my opinion
he should try to use his Essence of Broker to gain several Sacred Gears and other special items such as Sephiroth Graal, Vritra's Sacred Gears, Boosted Gear, Dimension Lost, Excalibur Fragments, and a Grim Reaper's Death Scythe then either use them himself, give them to subordinates/allies, or trade them with others to gain stuff more suited for himself. he should also try to gain Clan Traits and other special abilities such as Ajuka's Kankara Formula, Belial Clan's Worthless, and Belphegor Clan's Crack since those would work best for him in my opinion
12/17/2024 c35 Reader20448
HOLY FUCK. I read this a while ago but I got sidetracked with you other stories now that I binged this all again, good lord it was fucking good. Hope it returns
HOLY FUCK. I read this a while ago but I got sidetracked with you other stories now that I binged this all again, good lord it was fucking good. Hope it returns