for Deal with the Devil11/9/2021 c8 South Monk
Heya thanks for the hapter. I love this rofl, it makes sense to the story, Nd shows that not evrything is under op knowledge rofl.
Heya thanks for the hapter. I love this rofl, it makes sense to the story, Nd shows that not evrything is under op knowledge rofl.
11/9/2021 c8 Jabberwockyy
Oh that was an awesome twist. I love the way you are handling this. It's better that he doesn't become overpowered Gary Stu. Also I just thought about it, but will Issei also be gender-bent? Just curious.
Oh that was an awesome twist. I love the way you are handling this. It's better that he doesn't become overpowered Gary Stu. Also I just thought about it, but will Issei also be gender-bent? Just curious.
11/9/2021 c8 ghrrrr
Great chapter, loved the twist! A suggestion if i may, don't go creating twists to increase some tension. You are not there yet but if you go too deep into backtracking/retconning for the sake of tension you can and will ruin the story. Those kind of things best with moderation. Otherwise they would take more from to story than they give.
Like i said you are not there yet but i saw too many stories getting ruined by the author who try to replicate one thing they did positive and try to create or stretch similar things again and again.
And this one was definitely good just don't go too deep trying to create similar situations.
Once again great chapter, keep up the good work!
Great chapter, loved the twist! A suggestion if i may, don't go creating twists to increase some tension. You are not there yet but if you go too deep into backtracking/retconning for the sake of tension you can and will ruin the story. Those kind of things best with moderation. Otherwise they would take more from to story than they give.
Like i said you are not there yet but i saw too many stories getting ruined by the author who try to replicate one thing they did positive and try to create or stretch similar things again and again.
And this one was definitely good just don't go too deep trying to create similar situations.
Once again great chapter, keep up the good work!
11/9/2021 c8 alexfilhoaqw
That's what i call a true plot twist that has really deep meaning in the history not just "bruh i was the victim all along" and no explanation and what a fucking good power reveal
That's what i call a true plot twist that has really deep meaning in the history not just "bruh i was the victim all along" and no explanation and what a fucking good power reveal
11/9/2021 c8 
1xmasboss
story is really fun to read and the plot twist came out of nowhere also good luck trying to fix dxd’s plot and pls pls don’t have ExE
1xmasbossstory is really fun to read and the plot twist came out of nowhere also good luck trying to fix dxd’s plot and pls pls don’t have ExE
11/9/2021 c8 56Neon dagger
what fun and how terrible I mean hell I would feel like shit after that info drop if I were in that position
56Neon daggerwhat fun and how terrible I mean hell I would feel like shit after that info drop if I were in that position
11/9/2021 c8 iKuroto
Thanks for the chapter!
This chapter was fucking genial... Man, I didn't see it coming. There was no way to expect it! Really wonderful.
Thanks for the chapter!
This chapter was fucking genial... Man, I didn't see it coming. There was no way to expect it! Really wonderful.
11/9/2021 c8 2Isdrin The Wanderer
Great chapter. I don’t see anything wrong with it and I will complain about nothing. I love Razevan. His whole bad-guy-but-actually-good-guy twist was great. The plot is amazing.
I am glad you’re taking breaks. Hope you have a great day!
:)
2Isdrin The WandererGreat chapter. I don’t see anything wrong with it and I will complain about nothing. I love Razevan. His whole bad-guy-but-actually-good-guy twist was great. The plot is amazing.
I am glad you’re taking breaks. Hope you have a great day!
:)