for Deal with the Devil8/14/2021 c1 JustAFan123
This actually looks pretty epic. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
This actually looks pretty epic. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
8/13/2021 c1 Daisy
This seems infinitely more interesting than the game must go on. Shin is honestly a shitty MC. Hope with all the experience you've gathered from writing that one you'll make this one great.
This seems infinitely more interesting than the game must go on. Shin is honestly a shitty MC. Hope with all the experience you've gathered from writing that one you'll make this one great.
8/13/2021 c1 anonymous
Good so far very exited to see an mc that doesnt just rely on power/cheats to do things in a fictional world.
Question will he eventually use the binding power tp create a chain in the human world like in 5 years he could have everyone controlled with the right actions
Good so far very exited to see an mc that doesnt just rely on power/cheats to do things in a fictional world.
Question will he eventually use the binding power tp create a chain in the human world like in 5 years he could have everyone controlled with the right actions
8/13/2021 c1 AnimeNeet
“This one will have more lemons” Now you’re speaking my language
“This one will have more lemons” Now you’re speaking my language
8/13/2021 c1 Guest
Tbh I'm not sure I will enjoy this story, even if right now, I really.
The appeal of a gamer slash CYOA fanfic and what make it enjoyable to me is the whole 'I'm in a dangerous world, I will farm farm farm and cheat cheat cheat.
I say that while enjoying this first chapter, so just take what I'm saying as stupid rambling.
Tbh I'm not sure I will enjoy this story, even if right now, I really.
The appeal of a gamer slash CYOA fanfic and what make it enjoyable to me is the whole 'I'm in a dangerous world, I will farm farm farm and cheat cheat cheat.
I say that while enjoying this first chapter, so just take what I'm saying as stupid rambling.
8/15/2021 c1 Canos1337
From my personal opinion you are a very good writer i have re read the game must go on for like 4 times cause sometimes I miss a plot point or a joke and Everytime I re read i find it very entertaining so i gave this one a shot too and let me tell you, and I'm going to quote abridged cell here and say "before you had my attention but now you have my erection" i very much find this plot interesting and i don't see much stories about an mc originating from the old Satan faction they always made them feel lackluster in a way that they are but a puny little faction in the grand scheme of things that's why I enjoyed reading this first part very much and for real who doesn't an somewhat evil mc here and there that's why I liked reading dark wolf shiros stories they were interesting ideas and story lines anywho this story is great and i very much hope to see it blossom more have a good day and stay awesome!
From my personal opinion you are a very good writer i have re read the game must go on for like 4 times cause sometimes I miss a plot point or a joke and Everytime I re read i find it very entertaining so i gave this one a shot too and let me tell you, and I'm going to quote abridged cell here and say "before you had my attention but now you have my erection" i very much find this plot interesting and i don't see much stories about an mc originating from the old Satan faction they always made them feel lackluster in a way that they are but a puny little faction in the grand scheme of things that's why I enjoyed reading this first part very much and for real who doesn't an somewhat evil mc here and there that's why I liked reading dark wolf shiros stories they were interesting ideas and story lines anywho this story is great and i very much hope to see it blossom more have a good day and stay awesome!
8/14/2021 c1 Dragoon725
Yeah he's in for a lot of grief Damien is going to get in the future. While I won't say their aren't worser things that could happen to a reincarnate since at least they plan on keeping him alive now that he survived the experiments which is a hell of a lot better than being one of the failed test subjects of the Holy Sword Project where they were fully expecting to exterminate the failed subjects, I definitely can say this is not necessary better as I would prefer not being apart of literal organization of nutcases who consider Damien as their next Jinchuriki.
Yeah he's in for a lot of grief Damien is going to get in the future. While I won't say their aren't worser things that could happen to a reincarnate since at least they plan on keeping him alive now that he survived the experiments which is a hell of a lot better than being one of the failed test subjects of the Holy Sword Project where they were fully expecting to exterminate the failed subjects, I definitely can say this is not necessary better as I would prefer not being apart of literal organization of nutcases who consider Damien as their next Jinchuriki.