for Demon in Fodlan5/4 c148 Guest
Makes me wonder if Lemegeton intentionally wants them to discover the cure faster than intended.
Makes me wonder if Lemegeton intentionally wants them to discover the cure faster than intended.
5/4 c148 
4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Nice chapter. Enjoyed this little Hanneman and Flayn focused chapter!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkNice chapter. Enjoyed this little Hanneman and Flayn focused chapter!
4/25 c147 Runic Ebony
I freaking love the dynamic that Goetia and Rhea have. I honestly ship them so much, they piggyback off of each other so well!
I freaking love the dynamic that Goetia and Rhea have. I honestly ship them so much, they piggyback off of each other so well!
4/24 c147 86-Fan
Harsh but true. Chaldea caused more grail problems than anyone else, and it's mostly because of some hilarious reasons.
Harsh but true. Chaldea caused more grail problems than anyone else, and it's mostly because of some hilarious reasons.
4/24 c147 1MasterDarkElf
Ah, our man Harold, being a bro yet again. Also nice to see Goetia being a (secret) bro in turn. Also, wonderful moments with Byleth. Awww, she wanted affirmation from Goetia. The ship is going strong, haha! Nice scene with Rhea as well. I see Goetia is accidentally seducing multiple people again, haha. And damn, Jeralt. Why you gotta do Alois like that. Looking forward to more.
1MasterDarkElfAh, our man Harold, being a bro yet again. Also nice to see Goetia being a (secret) bro in turn. Also, wonderful moments with Byleth. Awww, she wanted affirmation from Goetia. The ship is going strong, haha! Nice scene with Rhea as well. I see Goetia is accidentally seducing multiple people again, haha. And damn, Jeralt. Why you gotta do Alois like that. Looking forward to more.
4/24 c147 wiewior
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Hey there!
I hope you’re doing well. I recently came across your work, "Demon in Fodlan", and I just had to reach out. The world you’ve built and the characters within it are so vivid and beautifully unique it really stuck with me.
I’m a commission artist who’s worked with several writers to turn their stories into comics. I’d love the chance to collaborate with you and bring your story to life visually. I already have some ideas for how your characters and key scenes could really shine in comic format.
If this sounds interesting to you, I’d be happy to share more details about how I work, the process, pricing, and how we could create something that stays true to your vision while opening it up to a wider audience.
Feel free to reach out anytime. I’d love to hear what you think!
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Looking forward to connecting and hopefully working together on something amazing.
4/14 c146 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Very good and interesting chapter! I found the points and advice Goetia gave Edelgard to be rather stimulating and something to indeed ponder. Starting the chapter out with something small and normal (in other words, with Dorothea helping advise Goetie about proper fashion protocol when it comes to the upcoming White Heron Cup) to this also made the chapter even more surprisingly effective and enjoyable. Need I say anything about Flayn? Lol.
But again I digress. Yes, Goetia has a point indeed, and perhaps because he does not know the answer (as he once was pretty much omniscient back then), he’s able to better understand the more “proper” way to go about things. Which is doing future changes (or at least the make the building blocks for such) in the present instead of enacting and enforcing the future on an un-ready present. So yeah. Very interesting way to have him take things now and how Edelgard’s goals once mirror led his own back then.
Even I can understand and agree with Edelgard’s goals, but it’s like Goetia said, we humans can be very fickle when it comes to change and extreme/sudden ideals replacing what was once expected and considered to be the norm.
Keep it up!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkVery good and interesting chapter! I found the points and advice Goetia gave Edelgard to be rather stimulating and something to indeed ponder. Starting the chapter out with something small and normal (in other words, with Dorothea helping advise Goetie about proper fashion protocol when it comes to the upcoming White Heron Cup) to this also made the chapter even more surprisingly effective and enjoyable. Need I say anything about Flayn? Lol.
But again I digress. Yes, Goetia has a point indeed, and perhaps because he does not know the answer (as he once was pretty much omniscient back then), he’s able to better understand the more “proper” way to go about things. Which is doing future changes (or at least the make the building blocks for such) in the present instead of enacting and enforcing the future on an un-ready present. So yeah. Very interesting way to have him take things now and how Edelgard’s goals once mirror led his own back then.
Even I can understand and agree with Edelgard’s goals, but it’s like Goetia said, we humans can be very fickle when it comes to change and extreme/sudden ideals replacing what was once expected and considered to be the norm.
Keep it up!
4/14 c146 7Blast Ketchup
The conversation between Edelgard and Goetia was beautifully written, bravo!
7Blast KetchupThe conversation between Edelgard and Goetia was beautifully written, bravo!
4/14 c146 36NinjaGogeta
Its not the common man one has to worry about when it comes to education and technology but the already rich and powerful who can become even more so through the manipulation of it. An uneducated and powerless population is only a benefit to those who wish to rule it.
36NinjaGogetaIts not the common man one has to worry about when it comes to education and technology but the already rich and powerful who can become even more so through the manipulation of it. An uneducated and powerless population is only a benefit to those who wish to rule it.
4/14 c146 1MasterDarkElf
Edelgard is about to enter her "Teach me, Goetia!" phase, haha. Quite enjoyed the scenes with her, Flayn, and Dorothea. Wish there was a bit more Byleth, but I'm guessing that is gonna be saved for the dance, haha. Looking forward to more.
1MasterDarkElfEdelgard is about to enter her "Teach me, Goetia!" phase, haha. Quite enjoyed the scenes with her, Flayn, and Dorothea. Wish there was a bit more Byleth, but I'm guessing that is gonna be saved for the dance, haha. Looking forward to more.
4/14 c146 raymond49090rc
Edelgard: “What if an ‘architect’ wanted to ‘build a house’ but only had a limited lifespan?”
Goetia: “So you want to start a revolution?”
Edelgard: Surprised Pikachu face that he saw through her incredibly opaque metaphor that he came up with
Also the chapter title vaguely worries me and makes me excited for the next chapter.
Edelgard: “What if an ‘architect’ wanted to ‘build a house’ but only had a limited lifespan?”
Goetia: “So you want to start a revolution?”
Edelgard: Surprised Pikachu face that he saw through her incredibly opaque metaphor that he came up with
Also the chapter title vaguely worries me and makes me excited for the next chapter.