FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Demon in Fodlan

11/14/2024 c131 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Great chapter! Kinda got werewolf vibes here at the end! Niiice.
11/13/2024 c131 Lily
Jealousy among Goetia's kids and Marianne unintentionally releasing the Beast.
11/13/2024 c131 Dhestrya
Nice
11/13/2024 c131 1MasterDarkElf
Ah, the first sibling spat. This will surely go well, haha. Hopefully Hanneman got the ok to bring Lindhardt in on this, otherwise he may get them in trouble. Looking forward to more!
11/13/2024 c131 farrelspiral
GOETIA IS FATHERING LET'S GOOOO THX YOU
11/4/2024 c130 Guest
If someone is better, best to let them do the work for you.
Though my bets are Goetia will not pleased at all if he founds out he was used as a pawn in someone's plan.
Would raise suspicion considering the mastermind would have known Goetia well enough that he would take that action in the first place.
11/3/2024 c130 Lily
Looks like Goetia unknowingly played into Lemegeton's plans and I bet he knew Kronya would be caught and used as Goetia's double spy.
Also Queen of Sheba must be proud of his camel approval.
11/3/2024 c130 farrelspiral
FATHER AND DAUGHTER TIME AGAIN LET'S GOOO
11/3/2024 c130 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Excellent work! Enjoyed this! Can only wonder which name possibly keeps appearing in the books from Abyss? Makes me wonder if Harold will be able to find the right clues to help inform Goetia?

Interesting to see both Goetia’s and Hanneman’s similar thoughts on the Blood Plague along with how thoughtful it was of Byleth to wait for Goetia to finish, striking up conversation with him afterwards. In my opinion, when she asked about the progress of the Statue of Seiros and wanting to see it, her asking made me think of a puppy for a weird reason. Lol! Even without showing emotions at times, Byleth can come off as rather adorable in her own way!

Then came the “group activity” with the girls and Goetia making a dramatic entrance to subject Marianne to a pop quiz! Talk about sudden and a little awkward eh? Lol. At least Marianne seems to slowly be warming up to him during that Tea Meetup. Progress is progress I say.

Finally, Lemegeton appears once again! Had to laugh at how he so easily made Solon cower and fearful, even if Solon didn’t want to do so. The Agarthans can really use a bit of a wake up slap when it comes to their arrogance and hubris. Lemegeton apparently serves as such. Either way though, it wouldn’t surprise me if that same arrogance causes Solon to do something drastic, leaving either Lemegeton, the Church, or Goetia/Byleth to do something about it and clean up the mess…
11/3/2024 c130 21Rialga
Solon is just one small step away from getting his shit rocked by Lemegeton, I can tell. Only a matter of time until he screws up somehow and gets the arrogance smacked out of him.

That aside, while my opinion on your character focus can... vary, to say the least, I really enjoyed Goetia's time with Marianne in the final section. He's really come a long way since the very beginning of this fic.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
11/3/2024 c130 1MasterDarkElf
That was adorable. Lysithea getting a little jealous of her new sister and said new sister bonding with Papa Goetia. Of course, he also spends some time with Uncle Hanneman (one of the only ones he can have an intelligent disuccsion with) and Mama Byleth along with Aunt Sothis, haha. Looking forward to more!
11/3/2024 c130 Cantstopreadingpleasehelpmeh
its been a while since ive seen a story go this long ans still remain utterly peak. especially when its a fanfic
11/3/2024 c130 KaleidoscopeZ
Marianne and Goetia looks so cute together, byleth's going to be jealous when if she saw it.
11/1/2024 c129 4Rowan Silvera
I've been reading this story from chapter 1.

And to be honest, I am loving it so far. It has strongly rooted itself as one of my favorite works overall. The characters are done wonderfully. I especially love how Goetia has evolved and developed over the course of the story.

I'd like to say thank you. Genuinely, thank you. I've had a truly joyous time reading this story and hope you continue it.
10/29/2024 c129 astrogeek20
Love it!
3,401 « Prev Page 1 .. 3 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 23 .. Last Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service