for Betrothed5/1 c10 pincho
Im done. Good luck!
Im done. Good luck!
5/1 c9 pincho
"And if they do, we can use magic to defend ourselves." Hermione says.
What do two first years believe they can do against a fully trained adult, especially if he was a death eater and bigot, though with this chapter who knows if that is still true.
"And if they do, we can use magic to defend ourselves." Hermione says.
What do two first years believe they can do against a fully trained adult, especially if he was a death eater and bigot, though with this chapter who knows if that is still true.
5/1 c9 pincho
Wow...don't know if I can read a story with this Lucius. His vilany is essential to everything, to an extent even more than Voldemort. He controls the school board, he controls the Minister and a decent portion of the government, and the media. He's responsible for the shittiness that is Draco, the bribery of Slytherin team, the ousting of Dumbledore, the Chamber of Secrets, and maintaining Sirius as a fugitive with a Kiss on sight order. Oh and the world cup incident.
Wow...don't know if I can read a story with this Lucius. His vilany is essential to everything, to an extent even more than Voldemort. He controls the school board, he controls the Minister and a decent portion of the government, and the media. He's responsible for the shittiness that is Draco, the bribery of Slytherin team, the ousting of Dumbledore, the Chamber of Secrets, and maintaining Sirius as a fugitive with a Kiss on sight order. Oh and the world cup incident.
5/1 c8 pincho
Don't see what is wrong with this chapter that you would have to apologize...
Don't see what is wrong with this chapter that you would have to apologize...
5/1 c5 pincho
Im sorry but this is a massive pet peeve of mine as a single father to two girls. Not real man and father would ever do what Mr Granger just did. I'm also a retired military combat man so even they wouldn't do that. We would have not allowed it in the first place if it was an issue.
Im sorry but this is a massive pet peeve of mine as a single father to two girls. Not real man and father would ever do what Mr Granger just did. I'm also a retired military combat man so even they wouldn't do that. We would have not allowed it in the first place if it was an issue.
5/1 c4 pincho
I'm disappointed that you didn’t have McGonagall state she told Dumbledore they were horrible people and instead to make Dumbledore seem innocent you made it that he monitored them and say nothing bad.
I'm disappointed that you didn’t have McGonagall state she told Dumbledore they were horrible people and instead to make Dumbledore seem innocent you made it that he monitored them and say nothing bad.
4/14 c4 Soraslove
Dumbles is such an asshole in the canon; and imo him being anything isn't what he really is.
Dumbles is such an asshole in the canon; and imo him being anything isn't what he really is.
4/2 c20 
6starlite22
If Hermione is not a muggle born, but heir of ravenclaw and her mother has sown magic, as does her fathers mother, then she shouldn’t have been able to be petrified, doesn’t make sense
6starlite22If Hermione is not a muggle born, but heir of ravenclaw and her mother has sown magic, as does her fathers mother, then she shouldn’t have been able to be petrified, doesn’t make sense
4/2 c17 starlite22
It’s like Hermiones parents completely forget meeting them, or knowing about Harry.
It’s like Hermiones parents completely forget meeting them, or knowing about Harry.
4/2 c14 starlite22
I’m perplexed why Harry and Hermione have not asked who the heir of hufflepuff is, or who the governor for that house is.
It’s seems unfair 3 heirs/govenors are hanging up together and leaving one house out of decisions.
I’m perplexed why Harry and Hermione have not asked who the heir of hufflepuff is, or who the governor for that house is.
It’s seems unfair 3 heirs/govenors are hanging up together and leaving one house out of decisions.