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8/19/2021 c1 Guest
If only she could make it last!
Will he be cellibate while he is away?
What about the other times?
Will we find out?
8/19/2021 c1 40txbabefan
Sorry, Joe, but you have become your father and maybe worse. That was some messed up stuff he was saying to her and definitely assault. Let's hope the break sticks this time. Great start!
8/19/2021 c1 shoegirl01
Thank god she managed to get through to him but geez he’s an ass
8/19/2021 c1 8Directorofchaos
Glad to see Steph standing up for herself!
8/19/2021 c1 27Elenimou
Yeah Joe you are your father. Forcing women to bow to your demands, disrespecting them, ignoring their wants and needs. You the author are the short order cook, fry the SOB.
8/19/2021 c1 23Peritales
Well done, with subtle layers of character complexity and emotion. The scars of childhood (for both of them) rising to the surface, driving behavior neither completely understands. Looking forward to more.
8/19/2021 c1 Tommy14
I'm glad Steph finally sees the truth in how she is treated and what kind of man Joe is.
8/18/2021 c1 ChristinaS
I'm glad Steph is trying to stand up for herself. She said no *repeatedly*, so that's rape.
Joe definitely is becoming his father.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/18/2021 c1 Guest
Abusive jerk
8/18/2021 c1 Caren47
The truth hurts. Your just like your father. Looking forward to more. Thanks for coming back to writing.I have enjoyed all your stories
8/18/2021 c1 1jules3677
Your Morelli character is a predator. Caricature and well written.
8/18/2021 c1 MnGrammaX3
Yeah, he's a real class act.
Cindy
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