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7/2/2022 c1 HMCM0122
Really good chapter!
8/30/2021 c1 GarbanzoBeans
Behind the scenes at the hospital is always a little tense. Tank knows how to diffuse the situation and always has Ranger and Stephanie's backs.
8/27/2021 c1 daysdreaming
So good, as usual!
8/25/2021 c1 Guest
Seems surprising to see Ranger and Joe working together rather than fighting over Steph.
With that many bullets flying they were All very lucky!
8/24/2021 c1 3Vulcan Rider
Absolutely loved it. I often think about that scene where she slammed the ambulance door shut and pushed Bunchy and the EMT out of the way before getting shot standing in front of Ranger. The sad part is that it is not the first, or even the second time her bravery has come to the forefront, and she's either saved a life, or solved a crime. The fact that she only gets negative press and never is given credit for her positive actions really grates on me. I guess that's why I love this scene so much. (the scene of the shooting) It's also a moment where Morelli has to acknowledge openly, that Steph was brave and saved his life.
Thanks for this. It filled in some big holes.
Maggie M.
8/23/2021 c1 21Alfonsina.d
Doing the Snoopy Dance! An UPDATE! Hoorah!
(do it again!)
8/20/2021 c1 ChristinaS
I'm so happy that you've come back & are filling in the gaps in Balancing Act. Excellent "filler".
Thank you!
8/20/2021 c1 baileygirl12
Thanks for a great chapter. I am so glad you're back writing again. You have such a wonderful talent to share. Can't wait for the muse to come roaring back!
8/20/2021 c1 Tommy14
I am so happy to read this missing scene. Getting to see everyones reaction to the shooting, the guys and Steph's injuries made Ch 13 even better. I also was happy this included the part about the Uzi firing stop after a gunshot was heard. We know it was Max that took out the Shooter with 1 shot. The appreciation and acknowledgement of Steph's quick thinking and as Tank said "All guts and luck" from the four she saved was heart warming. I also like the fact the EMT she saved was her Surgeon's brother. Anyway this was perfect Thank you for coming back and adding this to the story.
8/20/2021 c1 BuffaloWoman
Thank you for another fascinating look into the interactions between Ranger & Morelli! - Anna
8/20/2021 c1 millesfeuillesda
It's so so nice to have you back !
8/20/2021 c1 Barb4psu
Great update love it
8/20/2021 c1 Guest
I agree with Shandiss. This is well written and well told. I tend to like to read things that are what I would call “cannon-esque with a twist” and I think this is. I like the touch with Ranger and the bullet. Very in character I think. I also like that you have Morelli and Ranger as allies in this instance because it’s the sort of situation where they would be. I think it’s much more interesting to show the nature of their relationship for the complex thing it is. Sometimes they’re allies. Sometimes they’re not. Now I have to go read the rest.
~basquebabe
8/20/2021 c1 Guest
Excellent writing
8/20/2021 c1 Angela Mueller
You summed that up nicely, thank you.
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