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8/23/2021 c1 9Evertide
Now that's another unexpected pairing that you made work. The idea of Kyanna being Brooke's newest staff and potential plaything, well it's sure in character for Brooke and I wouldn't have thought it but Brooke makes some valid points. I like how Brooke's showing that she understands the drive to provide for kids but doesn't care all that much about them with her lack of interest in Kyanna's son's name.

I choose to imagine Kyanna took her offer, for two reasons. One, to imagine her second thoughts after meeting a certain one of her, um, coworkers. Two, even better, I'm imagining her and Audrey meeting around Brooke, having a "YOU'RE her niece?"/"YOU'RE her new help?" moment, and the mutual "oh HELL no" that follows is just...glorious.

Enjoy your break. You've left a good mark on this site's HuniePop section.
8/21/2021 c1 17Cypher DS
I love the little mannerisms Brooke and Kyanna display - the nervous twirling of Kyanna's hair, Brooke's elbow napkins (hey, poor people could've sat at that table!) and her utter shamelessness as she cycles through a rolodex of 'P' names for Kyanna's boy.

I also like the cutoff at the decisive moment, leaving the reader to imagine what could be. Given her love of family and children, I wonder how Kyanna would react to being "the other woman" in someone else's marriage.

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