
10/1/2021 c6
8lordcornwalis
So having wrapped up the story, I have to say I enjoyed it quite a bit. The characters feel authentic, their motivations feel like they organically stem from each of them. Really a good fun romp into one of the hiccups of life and how Star and Marco are always strong enough to overcome it. Keep up the great work!

So having wrapped up the story, I have to say I enjoyed it quite a bit. The characters feel authentic, their motivations feel like they organically stem from each of them. Really a good fun romp into one of the hiccups of life and how Star and Marco are always strong enough to overcome it. Keep up the great work!
9/13/2021 c4
5jkrust78
Oh man. Any more self awareness in this story and you'll have inadvertently created Starco AI.

Oh man. Any more self awareness in this story and you'll have inadvertently created Starco AI.
9/8/2021 c3
8lordcornwalis
Gotta say, love what I'm reading so far even if I'm not the biggest fan of your formatting. Still, tight little plot, and god damn you nailed Pony Head's voice in that dialogue. Kudos!

Gotta say, love what I'm reading so far even if I'm not the biggest fan of your formatting. Still, tight little plot, and god damn you nailed Pony Head's voice in that dialogue. Kudos!
9/4/2021 c3 AsSeenInBaybayin
Oooh, domestic spat.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Oooh, domestic spat.
Looking forward to the next chapter!