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8/23 c1 MargraveWidesky
Now I don't usually comment on fanfics, but this one has pushed me enough to do so.

I figured I had to express my kudos to you in a worded paragraph.

And to those who couldn't provide proper constructive criticism, or those who hide their salt behind the guise of criticism-

please, do something about it. (If you could of course) :)
8/23 c1 3Im The Person
I’m interested in seeing where this goes.
8/22 c1 Guest
Took way too long to become interesting. Honestly 14K words of just dragging your feet with pretty much nothing happening. Work on your pacing.
8/22 c1 Guest
I'm a guest user, so I can't favorite or anything, but this is amazing! Really good story. Made my day, thank you so much!
8/22 c1 Guest
Damn this is really good
8/22 c1 TheBestBoi
Dude this is awesome can't wait til the next chapter! Unique concept too!
8/22 c1 16BigSmokeYeet
I'd make it so they remember EVERYTHING Subaru went through including Rem. It would be interesting to see how they would all react to it.
8/22 c1 3Mara-chan90
Shouldn't Beatrice know what alcohol is, one doesn't live 400 years without learning about alcohol.
8/22 c1 Benagleska
oh so Subaru is addicted and now fell into a coma?
8/21 c1 1Minhaz25
Confused yet interested. Thought it was alcohol at first but it’s a magical comatose potion fhinfu
8/21 c1 LOVE IT
YESSSSSSSSS!
THESE EMOTIONS ARE WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!
TERROR, ANGUISH, LOVE, CONCERN !

AHHHHHHH~~~~~~~~~~ I HAVE MORE THAN 1P ORGAMOS RIGHT NOW SUFJSKSJSKSJSJJJSJAJSJAJBSHFOAGEIABEDASDKAMSMSMSMLALA

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WONDERFUL STORY !

THIS IS FREAKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD
8/21 c1 Deathenglegamers1144
Interesting story... Looking further the next chapter.
8/21 c1 hot tatoes
I love this and I cant wait for the next chapter!

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