for Ascendant10/5/2024 c5 Mericore
Amazing story. Do you think you could do similar one with Star wars(Galactic Empire) and/or Battlestar galactica(post-fall of colonies)?
Amazing story. Do you think you could do similar one with Star wars(Galactic Empire) and/or Battlestar galactica(post-fall of colonies)?
8/3/2024 c5 sugoijack9
Shepard is stupid. Deal with it. This is how a superior civilization deals an issue in regarding primitives.
Shepard is stupid. Deal with it. This is how a superior civilization deals an issue in regarding primitives.
6/20/2024 c3 
20Forsoothandconquest
A fully advanced Halo universe with the full unlimited capabilites of the Forerunners is a spbering thought
20ForsoothandconquestA fully advanced Halo universe with the full unlimited capabilites of the Forerunners is a spbering thought
1/7/2023 c5 Guest
I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Your vision of what the races of Halo could eventually build into is unique, as far as I've seen, and you handled the presentation of it so well imo. Sci-fi tends to get really bogged down in worldbuilding for the sake of worldbuilding...I think you've done a great job of giving us the tantalizing overview while moving the story along at a captivating pace.
The Mantle Ascendant people themselves were written so that they conveyed the vast gulf between their post-scarcity, mantle-oriented perspective and that of ME's races' relatively young outlook. I very much enjoyed the Admiral's practical reaction to killing Tevos compared to everyone else's.
There's a lot of opportunity for further expasion here and that's what makes it such a great short story, it's very thought-provoking.
Thank you for writing and posting this.
I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Your vision of what the races of Halo could eventually build into is unique, as far as I've seen, and you handled the presentation of it so well imo. Sci-fi tends to get really bogged down in worldbuilding for the sake of worldbuilding...I think you've done a great job of giving us the tantalizing overview while moving the story along at a captivating pace.
The Mantle Ascendant people themselves were written so that they conveyed the vast gulf between their post-scarcity, mantle-oriented perspective and that of ME's races' relatively young outlook. I very much enjoyed the Admiral's practical reaction to killing Tevos compared to everyone else's.
There's a lot of opportunity for further expasion here and that's what makes it such a great short story, it's very thought-provoking.
Thank you for writing and posting this.
12/16/2022 c5 Silky Button
fun! I really enjoyed reading this.
sad that Cortana and Chief are dead, but it really fits for this story
fun! I really enjoyed reading this.
sad that Cortana and Chief are dead, but it really fits for this story
12/3/2022 c5 Ghost Dragon Master
This was the first Halo/Mass Effect crossover I've read where it had the Master Chief in it where he was dead. I loved the funeral you gave him, as well as the graves for all the other Spartan 2's. This was a very good if short read. Granted with how advanced the Ascendancy was there was not much you could have done to lengthen the story without ruining it. I just get sad when good fanfiction ends is all.
This was the first Halo/Mass Effect crossover I've read where it had the Master Chief in it where he was dead. I loved the funeral you gave him, as well as the graves for all the other Spartan 2's. This was a very good if short read. Granted with how advanced the Ascendancy was there was not much you could have done to lengthen the story without ruining it. I just get sad when good fanfiction ends is all.
9/26/2022 c2 35hunter 139
I mean, I'm pretty sure the 100 billion years of knowledge is the point, to explain how eldritch the Precursors are when they predate the universe itself.
35hunter 139I mean, I'm pretty sure the 100 billion years of knowledge is the point, to explain how eldritch the Precursors are when they predate the universe itself.
4/2/2022 c5 Guest
I like to reread this story to forget about the Halo TV series.
I like to reread this story to forget about the Halo TV series.
1/19/2022 c5 Guest
Sad that the chief died.
Sad that the chief died.