for A Wicked Game5/5/2023 c2 StarBoundDisaster
I don't understand the protagonist's motivation for protecting people he never met, from a show he watched a decade ago, especially having Roman and Neo as role models for all that time. There is no way he would be interested in being some busybody hero that wants to fix all the world's problems.
Giving him plot knowledge was a mistake.
I don't understand the protagonist's motivation for protecting people he never met, from a show he watched a decade ago, especially having Roman and Neo as role models for all that time. There is no way he would be interested in being some busybody hero that wants to fix all the world's problems.
Giving him plot knowledge was a mistake.
5/4/2023 c1 Goldenexperience420
ima be hobest...I was...dissappointed reading this. I read until chap10 and I don't know if it gets better...but for me this is just annoying. You took a very fun and mystery type world and turned it into politics and corrupt organizations. Not my cup of tea so.. dropped.
ima be hobest...I was...dissappointed reading this. I read until chap10 and I don't know if it gets better...but for me this is just annoying. You took a very fun and mystery type world and turned it into politics and corrupt organizations. Not my cup of tea so.. dropped.
3/25/2023 c19 Nastadoa
OK I hate these type of story's if ruby doesn't return next chapter I'm done with you as an author period Krow I can accept both mcs I can't and yes I consider ruby one.
OK I hate these type of story's if ruby doesn't return next chapter I'm done with you as an author period Krow I can accept both mcs I can't and yes I consider ruby one.
3/18/2023 c24 
2MiharuTousaka
Ughhhhhh I just want the misunderstandings to go awayyyy, at least some of themn ;
At least Ruby and Gemini still have each other… and Sybil and Penny too I guess
2MiharuTousakaUghhhhhh I just want the misunderstandings to go awayyyy, at least some of themn ;
At least Ruby and Gemini still have each other… and Sybil and Penny too I guess
3/18/2023 c22 MiharuTousaka
I don’t remember anything from yugioh when I was ten, but even so, that was epic lol
I don’t remember anything from yugioh when I was ten, but even so, that was epic lol
3/18/2023 c19 MiharuTousaka
Oh shit, I thought Onyx was gonna be saved last second. RIP. Also where the fudge are you Gemini?! Wait, Amber and Qrow too?! Bruh… MonkaW omg the cliffhanger whyyyyyyyyy
Oh shit, I thought Onyx was gonna be saved last second. RIP. Also where the fudge are you Gemini?! Wait, Amber and Qrow too?! Bruh… MonkaW omg the cliffhanger whyyyyyyyyy
3/18/2023 c17 MiharuTousaka
Eugh, Blake. Always jumping to conclusions and just being an all around idiot. Perfectly in character tho lmao
Eugh, Blake. Always jumping to conclusions and just being an all around idiot. Perfectly in character tho lmao
3/18/2023 c13 MiharuTousaka
Eugh, politics and corrupted politicians, yucky
Jaqcues to the rescue…? Lmao
Eugh, politics and corrupted politicians, yucky
Jaqcues to the rescue…? Lmao