
1/1 c1 Guest
this was pretty good. maybe try to make it a little lonhger by showing what happened with harry and annabeeth.
this was pretty good. maybe try to make it a little lonhger by showing what happened with harry and annabeeth.
9/20/2021 c1 Hey
This could be an interesting two-shot. I also think this could be a whole long fanfic if the two switched bodies. Like others wouldn't immediately notice that they have been switched. Like their minds would be in the wrong body.
This could be an interesting two-shot. I also think this could be a whole long fanfic if the two switched bodies. Like others wouldn't immediately notice that they have been switched. Like their minds would be in the wrong body.
8/31/2021 c1 Guest
I really like this! Even though it was short it had a great bit of story for how long it was, great job! If you add more chapters that would be great, if not, then that’s fine, I still enjoyed it.
I really like this! Even though it was short it had a great bit of story for how long it was, great job! If you add more chapters that would be great, if not, then that’s fine, I still enjoyed it.
8/31/2021 c1
1Wavey2362
Meh... it was relatively short and lacked exposition y descriptions imo
Also the idea is not the best, it would've been a lot cooler if they are in other body's so not everyone immediately notices that they actually don't belong there.

Meh... it was relatively short and lacked exposition y descriptions imo
Also the idea is not the best, it would've been a lot cooler if they are in other body's so not everyone immediately notices that they actually don't belong there.
8/30/2021 c1
2SecretLegends
This is VERY interesting. And yes, please do make it a two shot. I would love to know how Harry can go back and forth from between the two worlds. Otherwise, great story! :)

This is VERY interesting. And yes, please do make it a two shot. I would love to know how Harry can go back and forth from between the two worlds. Otherwise, great story! :)