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9/29/2021 c1 karterfan
I am enjoying this even as sad as it is but OMG I want to punch Carly and Jason for this and everyone else on canvas who was propping the hell out of Jarly and still is. Poor Danny and Jake. Their poor moms too! Update soon!
9/26/2021 c2 Mariposa101
Oh this is so good. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.
9/21/2021 c2 1bjq
omg fabulous. PLease update soon
9/20/2021 c2 Guest
Great story so far! It's very realistic and it is what's happening on the show, Danny and Jake aren't as important to Jason as Carly's kids are...
9/16/2021 c2 20jrchandlerfan1
I went and re-read ch 1 and 2, and honestly, besides my own comments at the beginning, there's really not a lot of hate towards Carly in the actual story lol (at least for now, I'm still deciding where to take this). I think Jake said the most against her-that she'll probably monopolize Jason's time even more. It was actually more negative towards Jason and most of the boys' resentment is towards him and his choices. I mean, we can still continue this conversation, but it's not going to convince me to change Jake and Danny's perspectives on this.

But I noticed I did make a mistake that has nothing to do with Carly. I said that Jake went to school with Toby since kindergarten and totally negated that he was missing for five years. Oops, I better fix that lol.

As for the show/canon, I used to love Carly. And I applauded her when she kept Morgan from Sonny after Michael was shot. She was finally putting one of her kids first. But then I started seeing the hypocrisy from her. She holds people to high standards that she won't hold herself to. But she's not alone in that. Sonny, Jason, and often Sam do that too. Anyone who gets caught up in the mob/cult thinks they're high and mighty above everyone else. For a while I wanted to see her redeemed and back with Jax, but now I'm just done with her. Besides the short time period she protected Morgan from the mob, she has never put her kids first. She even admitted to Joss not too long ago that she loves Sonny and Jason more than her own kids when she said she stays in the mob because the people she loves are in it. If she loved her children more, then she would choose them and leave both Sonny and Jason. But it was even worse when she took over. And I hate how controlling she is, not just with Jason. More than once she has gone over to the Qs and told Michael that it's past Wiley's bedtime. That is not her place to decide.
9/16/2021 c1 Chrissyfan
I agree that the hatred for Carly comes from her monopoly on his life, personally for me her monopoly on the show, period. It is Carly in stereo and has been for years. Beyond that I'll save the Carly rant that is about to blow for another venue.
9/16/2021 c1 MusicIsLuv91
The thing is Carly doesn’t drag Jason into her life. He’s there willingly. If Carly has a monopoly on Jason’s life it’s because he’s allowed it. I can’t remember a scene where Carly has ever tried to prevent Jason from being apart of his children’s lives. She has always pushed for him to be a father to his kids. His relationship with carly’s children is stronger than his relationship with his kids because she never tried to force him out of their lives because he was too dangerous. Even when she felt Sonny was too dangerous she never believed Jason was.
9/15/2021 c2 sweetgirl23
I think the Carly hate stems from the monopoly she has on his life. The way she drags him into all her drama, and the way she inserts herself into his business and personal life. It's like she and her kids has to be #1 in his life, even before his own kids.

I think we never see Jason be actively involved in his kids life like he is with Carly's kids. We see it every blue moon, but not enough to get a sense of parental bond between them.
9/14/2021 c1 jrchandlerfan1
Thank you Dulces and Guest for taking the time to read and comment. I can't PM guest accounts, so I don't know if you'll see this. I'd like to remind you I did place a warning in the description and in chapter 1 that this story is anti-Jason, anti-Carly, and anti-Jarly. You're still welcome to read and review, but if you're looking for Jarly to be written in a good light, I'm afraid you've chosen the wrong story. I don't get paid to write this, it's simply for fun and to write what I'd like to see happen on the show and point out some hypocrisies I see in certain characters.

That said, I'm always up for civil conservation and anyone is welcome to join. I think the bottom line is, Jason chose the mob life and always chooses to put Carly and Sonny and their kids above any woman he is with and also his sons. Sam finally saw the light earlier this year and chose to put her kids first (though I am suspicious of her motives, but this could lead into another discussion). I still need more from Sam and I don't necessarily need to see the kids physically onscreen (though it's always nice to see them) to know if someone is a good parent or not. It's shown through their actions, dialogue, and choices. In my opinion Sam made the best choice by choosing to protect her children from the mob. I know the writers have conditioned the audience into believing the safest place to be is living with mobsters, which in my opinion is what blinds people. But over all, Sam has not been a good mother since Jason returned. He is an addiction/obsession for her and she does not put her children first when she's with him. But this story isn't focusing on that, it's focusing on Jason's parenting. I had Sam hit rock bottom in my Priorities series where I shed a light on her poor choices and bad parenting. This story is about how Jason's poor choices in life are affecting his sons.

Sure, Carly has pushed Jason to be active in his kids' lives when it's suitable to her. Carly pulls the strings and Jason makes no attempt to fight those strings. Neither do her children, which is yet another discussion in and of itself. Jason is bound to his life with Carson and the mob and will never put his children or the women he's with above it. So I don't think I'm making Carly a bad guy, she's done that herself.

And Elizabeth, I still say she was right to protect Jake from the mob. Bringing Franco home was a horrible decision for a mother to make, but honestly outside of that time period, I think she's been one of the best mothers on the show. And finally now that he's gone, she's freer and is raising her own boys again instead of him taking over every opportunity he got. But Elizabeth actually has made more attempts than Jason has in recent years, by having to go to him and ask him to spend time with Jake. She shouldn't have to do that. The second he found out he was Jake's father he should've done whatever it took to get out of the mob. Yes, it probably wouldn't taken years and it would be risky, but by now and probably sooner, he would've been a bigger part of his sons' lives.
9/14/2021 c1 Guest
So are we going to pretend that Liz didn’t lie about Jake’s paternity and that she didn’t want Jason to be active in Jake’s life because of the danger. Isn’t that the same excuse Sam used when she ended things. There is no excuse for Jason neglecting his son’s but their mother’s deserve the blame to because they planted the “you’re too dangerous to be a father “ seed and he is respecting their wishes. Carly has always pushed for Jason to be active in his kids lives even when he doesn’t want to hear it. She deserves 0 blame for the state of Jason’s relationships with his sons. The Carly hate blinds a lot of people.
9/14/2021 c2 Dulces
I'm not going to condone what Jason is doing to the boys, but I don't really understand the Carly hate. Jason left Carly out of his family's information for years, Elizabeth doesn't seem to want to let Carly be around any of her children and Sam well I don't know that situation. I know its easy to bash Carly but this falls on their parents on why Carly doesn't have a better relationship with them. If you're going to make Carly a bad guy then you should probably let her stay married to Jason and become the evil step mother.
9/14/2021 c2 Chrissyfan
My poor Jake and Danny. Danny thinks that to get Jason's attention he has to rescue Donna and Jake is going to try and cope the best he can. Oh yeah, I'd love to see Elizabeth and Sam channel their best momma bear and if they do it at the same time all the better and Carly can stuff it. Great update.
9/13/2021 c2 Monique White
Love it please post more soon.
9/14/2021 c2 sessalc
I like where you were going with chapter 1, but with chapter 2 you lost me. Gun and Drugs.
9/14/2021 c2 Crawleyfan
It's very interesting that Jake and Danny are dealing with the same situation in different yet similar ways. Danny wants to be like Jason so that maybe Jason will notice him. Poor Jake is so hurt that Jason doesn't seem to care about him that he just wants to forget.
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