
3/31 c118 Guest
This fanfic is absolutely amazing! Please keep updating it!
This fanfic is absolutely amazing! Please keep updating it!
3/8 c119 RandoFox
Really hope the more muggles are able to piece shit together and do something, it feels wrong that 3 million people were killed but they're able to just cover it up.
Really hope the more muggles are able to piece shit together and do something, it feels wrong that 3 million people were killed but they're able to just cover it up.
2/16 c117 Robotdocter
making Petunia the STOP word is perfect, because i highly doubt he has any good memories of that word anymore
making Petunia the STOP word is perfect, because i highly doubt he has any good memories of that word anymore
2/16 c113 Robotdocter
i just couldnt keep reading that past arc. i might come back to it later but while i love betrayal fics and angst and all sorts of it, thats just Cruel
i just couldnt keep reading that past arc. i might come back to it later but while i love betrayal fics and angst and all sorts of it, thats just Cruel
2/14 c47 Robotdocter
ok i know youve given reason for Harry losing all the time but what the actual fuck
ok i know youve given reason for Harry losing all the time but what the actual fuck
2/14 c43 Robotdocter
i understand he did murder Graham, but everyone else was actively trying to kill innocents, so i have absolutely no clue why everyone is so on the fence about that being the right thing to have done.
also jesus christ im starting to genuinely hate a lot of the characters in this (not a bad thing, they are truly the worst) you killed off Susan and now im just hoping someone like Ron or Neville gets whats comin to him for basically doing nothing but be a massive Prick to anyone with half a brain
i understand he did murder Graham, but everyone else was actively trying to kill innocents, so i have absolutely no clue why everyone is so on the fence about that being the right thing to have done.
also jesus christ im starting to genuinely hate a lot of the characters in this (not a bad thing, they are truly the worst) you killed off Susan and now im just hoping someone like Ron or Neville gets whats comin to him for basically doing nothing but be a massive Prick to anyone with half a brain
1/29 c24 jrjsmith0
Yeah. Imma drop it here not really interested in this harry at all hes just an angry kid.
Yeah. Imma drop it here not really interested in this harry at all hes just an angry kid.
1/29 c136 death390
i cant continue i tried, if i was rating the first 1/2 it would be an 8, but this last 1/2 is barely reaching a 6 and i like slow burn stories. it just feels like mostly filler lately with minimalism progress and occasional payoffs for minor things but nothing is really happening. i get your trying to tie in people's mental states but it's difficult to read only that and minor positioning that both sides are doing with nothing else to buffer It.
i cant continue i tried, if i was rating the first 1/2 it would be an 8, but this last 1/2 is barely reaching a 6 and i like slow burn stories. it just feels like mostly filler lately with minimalism progress and occasional payoffs for minor things but nothing is really happening. i get your trying to tie in people's mental states but it's difficult to read only that and minor positioning that both sides are doing with nothing else to buffer It.
1/23 c116 Reade1314
Great fic! Your summary sucks though, you described him as subpar. Latest i think ive noticed a decent hp fic b4.
Great fic! Your summary sucks though, you described him as subpar. Latest i think ive noticed a decent hp fic b4.