for Pray For The Wicked9/8 c10 
1Joe Lawyer
I would love to continue you reading this fic since its so long, but this story is ultra focused on Harry's feeling and emotions and trauma. He is an emo king that needs a psychiatrist. Actual story events appear to be of minor importance, at best. That's just not my kind of fic.
I wish you well in your writing.
1Joe LawyerI would love to continue you reading this fic since its so long, but this story is ultra focused on Harry's feeling and emotions and trauma. He is an emo king that needs a psychiatrist. Actual story events appear to be of minor importance, at best. That's just not my kind of fic.
I wish you well in your writing.
9/7 c7 Joe Lawyer
I have a feeling that if Harry had even a single adult in his life that had his best interests at heart Snape would not have treated him like this.
This level of vitriol from snape really doesnt make sense to me, though. Yes, i know he loved lily and hated James but without the BWL stuff, what kind of special treatment could Harry have ever received? What kind of privileged upbringing even makes sense in this context? I know hate can make people believe crazy things but this feels too far.
I have a feeling that if Harry had even a single adult in his life that had his best interests at heart Snape would not have treated him like this.
This level of vitriol from snape really doesnt make sense to me, though. Yes, i know he loved lily and hated James but without the BWL stuff, what kind of special treatment could Harry have ever received? What kind of privileged upbringing even makes sense in this context? I know hate can make people believe crazy things but this feels too far.
9/5 c121 WolfSpin
I'm so EXCITED that you are THIRTEEN chapters ahead! By the time they are all posted it will be October 2025! What a big waste of time this story is.
After three years of writing you still haven't completed one full year of time in this story. Pathetic.
I'm so EXCITED that you are THIRTEEN chapters ahead! By the time they are all posted it will be October 2025! What a big waste of time this story is.
After three years of writing you still haven't completed one full year of time in this story. Pathetic.
9/4 c63 Lofty breeze
your knowledge of how wands work in hp is not very good, even the books people change wands.
your knowledge of how wands work in hp is not very good, even the books people change wands.
9/1 c121 17griffin blackwood
Love the molly dynamic. Almost half expected him to say to join them too to make her feel more useful
17griffin blackwoodLove the molly dynamic. Almost half expected him to say to join them too to make her feel more useful
8/24 c24 Nightcrawler X
This is the cringiest, edgiest little rat power fantasy I've read so far. You should put your fic under "Humour" section.
This is the cringiest, edgiest little rat power fantasy I've read so far. You should put your fic under "Humour" section.
8/18 c15 IloveHeat
Okay. The whole montague thing has me so stressed regarding rape I cannot even enjoy the rest. Incredible story and great writing but I might have to skip a few chapters and make sure Harry is okay before I go back and read what exactly happened
Okay. The whole montague thing has me so stressed regarding rape I cannot even enjoy the rest. Incredible story and great writing but I might have to skip a few chapters and make sure Harry is okay before I go back and read what exactly happened
8/14 c3 Guest
I’m not going to lie, this just isn’t very good. His character is just all over the place.
I’m not going to lie, this just isn’t very good. His character is just all over the place.
8/8 c120 Sunny JS
I hope Harry's treatment to Augusta doesn't bite him in the ass
I hope Harry's treatment to Augusta doesn't bite him in the ass
8/9 c120 Beyondthesea16
nice update, i think potter may not want to bite the hand of too many people at once, madam longbottom and neville do deserve to put kick down a peg or two but potter needs to be careful that doesn't come back to bite him in the a**, so daphne is about to be potter's hoe and hermione lacking in educational skill is hard to read about hopefully she will be able to get her brilliant mind back, waiting for more
nice update, i think potter may not want to bite the hand of too many people at once, madam longbottom and neville do deserve to put kick down a peg or two but potter needs to be careful that doesn't come back to bite him in the a**, so daphne is about to be potter's hoe and hermione lacking in educational skill is hard to read about hopefully she will be able to get her brilliant mind back, waiting for more