for Pray For The Wicked12/16/2023 c1 Guest
Pray v. Prey - Check it out and make sure you have the one you want in your title.
Pray v. Prey - Check it out and make sure you have the one you want in your title.
12/10/2023 c9 Polo
I tried to enjoy reading this fanfic but it’s just Harry losing over and over again
I tried to enjoy reading this fanfic but it’s just Harry losing over and over again
12/6/2023 c96 Beyondthesea16
damn when does the light shine bright, the dark seems to be every present and extremely smart, poor bones line is dead now, and neville and the weasley crew have handed themselves to the death eaters, this is when harry should show up at the ministry and save hermione, waiting for more
damn when does the light shine bright, the dark seems to be every present and extremely smart, poor bones line is dead now, and neville and the weasley crew have handed themselves to the death eaters, this is when harry should show up at the ministry and save hermione, waiting for more
12/5/2023 c96 
2Gabilian
You have fallen into the common fanfiction hole of making the bad guys look super smart, super powerful and practically infallible while the "good guys" (if there are any in this fic, which is questionable) all appear to be incompetent idiots, with the only exception of Dumbledore. The unrelenting negativity of this story is really starting to wear on me. Will something good ever happen?
2GabilianYou have fallen into the common fanfiction hole of making the bad guys look super smart, super powerful and practically infallible while the "good guys" (if there are any in this fic, which is questionable) all appear to be incompetent idiots, with the only exception of Dumbledore. The unrelenting negativity of this story is really starting to wear on me. Will something good ever happen?
12/4/2023 c92 2hpfan111
My man, hire me as a writer but please increase the speed of publishing chapters. It's been 2 years in real life and less than 1 in the fic. I love this story. I absolutely do. but, I feel like I won't be excited anymore if there are big breaks between me reading the story (I always read an entire arc fully which obviously takes some time)
2hpfan111My man, hire me as a writer but please increase the speed of publishing chapters. It's been 2 years in real life and less than 1 in the fic. I love this story. I absolutely do. but, I feel like I won't be excited anymore if there are big breaks between me reading the story (I always read an entire arc fully which obviously takes some time)
12/3/2023 c95 dustbunnie
I hope next chapter Harry has to take a dump so we can read all about it.
I hope next chapter Harry has to take a dump so we can read all about it.
12/3/2023 c95 3TheTrickster96
I'm done with this story now. Very slow plot and nearly at 100 chapters of needless exposition.
3TheTrickster96I'm done with this story now. Very slow plot and nearly at 100 chapters of needless exposition.
12/2/2023 c74 2hpfan111
One more review. The story seems a little slow. Like, you don't have to write every single scene. Try to fit some events into the conversations or descriptions in others
2hpfan111One more review. The story seems a little slow. Like, you don't have to write every single scene. Try to fit some events into the conversations or descriptions in others
12/2/2023 c95 Sunny JS
Obviously you're ahead of the posted chapters, but why did Harry not just use his knife to cause severe harm to Dolohov? Like that was the whole reason he took the knife along with his wand? Anyway, I can't believe we've only hit 25% of this story, cause i remember u saying this would be a 2m story, and the fact that 500k words has just been 1 year at Hogwarts is insane.
Obviously you're ahead of the posted chapters, but why did Harry not just use his knife to cause severe harm to Dolohov? Like that was the whole reason he took the knife along with his wand? Anyway, I can't believe we've only hit 25% of this story, cause i remember u saying this would be a 2m story, and the fact that 500k words has just been 1 year at Hogwarts is insane.
12/2/2023 c95 Beyondthesea16
nice update, neville is an idiot who has allowed his hate or fear of harry to lead him to believe everything elijah says, what is happening to remus (even though i really can't stand him or sirius due to how they have treated harry), after all this time is harry finally going to take the time to actually step back and look at the situation before reacting, waiting for more
nice update, neville is an idiot who has allowed his hate or fear of harry to lead him to believe everything elijah says, what is happening to remus (even though i really can't stand him or sirius due to how they have treated harry), after all this time is harry finally going to take the time to actually step back and look at the situation before reacting, waiting for more
12/2/2023 c95 gu61
Interesting how stupid Neville is and how ignorant the Weasley’s are. Harry seemed to almost purge his true anger like me could start to master wandless magic. I hope he is the one to save Hermione like she saved him. Main problem is you say your 11 ch. ahead but your posts are falling more and more behind. You should possibly think about post 2 times a week for a few weeks.
Interesting how stupid Neville is and how ignorant the Weasley’s are. Harry seemed to almost purge his true anger like me could start to master wandless magic. I hope he is the one to save Hermione like she saved him. Main problem is you say your 11 ch. ahead but your posts are falling more and more behind. You should possibly think about post 2 times a week for a few weeks.
12/2/2023 c95 17griffin blackwood
Ii know canon harry was always impetuous but this is one of the fics where neville doing so really irks me because there are so many different people trying to give hin. Reasonable reality check and his bruised ego makes him seem likek a malfoy le gasp! Keep up the great work and heres to hoping harry continues to evolve ad regain more humanity
17griffin blackwoodIi know canon harry was always impetuous but this is one of the fics where neville doing so really irks me because there are so many different people trying to give hin. Reasonable reality check and his bruised ego makes him seem likek a malfoy le gasp! Keep up the great work and heres to hoping harry continues to evolve ad regain more humanity