11/25/2023 c94 Beyondthesea16
nice update, damn the cliffhanger!, waiting for more (chewing on nails)

11/24/2023 c94 dav102102
he is getting stronger, this would have gassed him before

11/20/2023 c8 Reginald Farquaad
Daphne’s weird obsession over Harry despite him being a mediocre nobody up to this point (in everyone else’s POV) and weird competency were suspicious. But the last line about destiny make her sound like she knows how canon Harry should be. But that could be me just treading way too many SI and time travel fics.

11/14/2023 c93 Sunny JS
I feel like the light side needs a reality check and hopefully this is it. Also, how are people still in denial about Voldemort, it's bordering on stupidity and why the hell does Rufus feel the need to growl Harry's name? My man just saved your life after you had him locked up.

Re Neville, I'm not sure if Voldemort is addling his mind, but god damn do you wanna just bow down and kiss the hem of Elijahs feet? He literally believes anything he says without checking.

Re the overall story, I said this a few chapters back, but I don't see anything other than a Voldemort win in the future. Everyone on the other faction is incredibly divided and those that do fight are severely handicapping themselves in a fight. The DEs are out here casting hell fires and then you've got the aurors still using stunners. Anyway, thank you for the chapter and I can't wait for the next.

11/8/2023 c43 2hpfan111
Ok. I'm gonna take this point to write a review. First of all, it's been an amazing fic so far. Great job. I really look forward to whatever you have planned. But-and of course, there is a but- it's taking too long for much time to pass, I feel. Like it's 43rd chapter, which is probably around 200k words and it's only been 3 and a half months so far! Now I'm not saying that the narration is bad or even wrongly paced. But seeing as at this point in time, only 92 chapters have been published and with your own admission, the story is going to go into even 7th year and possibly beyond, I just wonder how long it's going to take for the story to actually finish, especially because it's been going on for over 2 years now. I definitely don't wish for you to compromise on the quality of the story. It's really really good right now. But I find my interest in a story waning if I'm unable to read it quickly enough and I don't wish for that to be the case here since I love this one. I have a suggestion. You can use narration tools to be able to write more in the same amount of time you would normally dedicate to writing. Just a thought.

11/5/2023 c92 2roon0
An intense chapter and so enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.

11/4/2023 c92 17griffin blackwood
Inline with tradition hes still an emo mess for fifth year! I really love how annoued with harry i am for one of the first times. I get to a degree why he does what he does but im glad regulus called him out