for Pray For The Wicked6/27/2023 c76 dtonebu
I agree with (Against Fate). The shit just doesn't stop. I understand that this is a drama and so on, but even in it there are respites. And the fact that many have learned the reason for Potter's revenge can hardly be called such. The main thing is that Potter himself is obviously sorry and wants to improve, but then it's like a switch is triggered and he starts doing some bullshit again. I don't know, it's just not my cup of tea, probably. I suppose it's well written but for an amateur.
I agree with (Against Fate). The shit just doesn't stop. I understand that this is a drama and so on, but even in it there are respites. And the fact that many have learned the reason for Potter's revenge can hardly be called such. The main thing is that Potter himself is obviously sorry and wants to improve, but then it's like a switch is triggered and he starts doing some bullshit again. I don't know, it's just not my cup of tea, probably. I suppose it's well written but for an amateur.
6/27/2023 c48 
1Against Fate
Why are ALL your characters so hateful and irredeemable… it is a vry well written story but it has no respite from all the edge and angst. Literally no respite. It is tiresome to read past a point. I kept reading and reading because it had a vry similar vibe and prerrogative to one of my favorite fanfics ever by Silens Cursor, Renegade Cause, but here everybody is a major a-hole, the protagonist included, the drama sometimes feels manufactured and pushed, since no logical person antagonises everybody that much at every turn no matter their trauma and, well… I am kinda done, may skim forward to see where it leads but it is such a waste. I commend you on your exquisite writing and plot, the ideas are amazing and the pacing is, too, but the characters and their total lack of any redeeming qualities or positive traits make this a chore to read further.
1Against FateWhy are ALL your characters so hateful and irredeemable… it is a vry well written story but it has no respite from all the edge and angst. Literally no respite. It is tiresome to read past a point. I kept reading and reading because it had a vry similar vibe and prerrogative to one of my favorite fanfics ever by Silens Cursor, Renegade Cause, but here everybody is a major a-hole, the protagonist included, the drama sometimes feels manufactured and pushed, since no logical person antagonises everybody that much at every turn no matter their trauma and, well… I am kinda done, may skim forward to see where it leads but it is such a waste. I commend you on your exquisite writing and plot, the ideas are amazing and the pacing is, too, but the characters and their total lack of any redeeming qualities or positive traits make this a chore to read further.
6/27/2023 c76 Beyondthesea16
nice update, just got caught up and damn i need to know what the hell happened to harry and this idiot neville, how he just became best friends with eli is crazy still, since he truly doesn't understand the montague family, waiting for more
nice update, just got caught up and damn i need to know what the hell happened to harry and this idiot neville, how he just became best friends with eli is crazy still, since he truly doesn't understand the montague family, waiting for more
6/23/2023 c76 Ep
Excellent
Excellent
6/23/2023 c76 nishanttorres94
Wow, Neville is really , really unlikeable here. Needs a serious reality check.
Wow, Neville is really , really unlikeable here. Needs a serious reality check.
6/21/2023 c32 JuliusCorvinus
If Harry has an open wound for 4 years, wouldn't there be some kind of infection possibly?
If Harry has an open wound for 4 years, wouldn't there be some kind of infection possibly?