9/24/2021 c1 Guest
Please make this a Drarry fic
Please make this a Drarry fic
9/24/2021 c2 PoterFan
It would be great if you added some background context for Harry. We have no idea if his parents are still alive or not. What made him so closed off and unpopular? Who takes care of him? Is he an orphan? The other Slytherin's don't seem to make fun of him for either being poor or a half-blood. I thought social status matter to the snakes. Why do they accept him even if they basically ignore him? It's hard to understand Harry's character without at least some of this information.
I hope you give us some hints in the upcoimg chapters. Thanks.
It would be great if you added some background context for Harry. We have no idea if his parents are still alive or not. What made him so closed off and unpopular? Who takes care of him? Is he an orphan? The other Slytherin's don't seem to make fun of him for either being poor or a half-blood. I thought social status matter to the snakes. Why do they accept him even if they basically ignore him? It's hard to understand Harry's character without at least some of this information.
I hope you give us some hints in the upcoimg chapters. Thanks.
9/23/2021 c2 1Guest2112
Another good chapter although I am wondering how is this Harry so easy to talk to if he is a loner? Meh that's just me, keep at it! I look forward on learning more about Harry's background life as a child!
Another good chapter although I am wondering how is this Harry so easy to talk to if he is a loner? Meh that's just me, keep at it! I look forward on learning more about Harry's background life as a child!
9/23/2021 c2 25stevem1
Great story so far.
For someone who has allegedly kept a lid on things for 5 years, Harry seems very emotionally volatile.
Great story so far.
For someone who has allegedly kept a lid on things for 5 years, Harry seems very emotionally volatile.
9/23/2021 c2 15hero of all
This legit is very good and I’m excited to see the progression of this story and that you don’t just have 1D characters. Excited to see the moment that everyone realizes or Harry becomes the next great wizards in the like of Voldemort, dumbledore or grindelwald
This legit is very good and I’m excited to see the progression of this story and that you don’t just have 1D characters. Excited to see the moment that everyone realizes or Harry becomes the next great wizards in the like of Voldemort, dumbledore or grindelwald
9/21/2021 c1 LS
Very interesting so far! Is this a Harry/Hermione pairing? Please say it is so :)
Very interesting so far! Is this a Harry/Hermione pairing? Please say it is so :)
9/21/2021 c1 2MonsterOfLogic
I believe this is going to be great...
and also isn't hansy a must here... !
I believe this is going to be great...
and also isn't hansy a must here... !
9/20/2021 c1 1Guest2112
I really believe this will go on to be a great story. I would love to learn more about the events of Halloween of '81, plus what happened to Sirius and in general what happened to Harry and of course how much does the old goat know. I would like to believe this will be updated soon, or have a steady schedule, but as long as it's as good as this I can't complain. Nice work!
I really believe this will go on to be a great story. I would love to learn more about the events of Halloween of '81, plus what happened to Sirius and in general what happened to Harry and of course how much does the old goat know. I would like to believe this will be updated soon, or have a steady schedule, but as long as it's as good as this I can't complain. Nice work!
9/20/2021 c1 iiNeo
Hmmm. This looks interesting but theses kind of fics almost always never get finished so I won't hold my breath.
Hmmm. This looks interesting but theses kind of fics almost always never get finished so I won't hold my breath.