for Pray For The Wicked3/11 c106 Naiden
Your stuff definitely isn't worth paying for if you can't even write battle scenes that make sense. Voldemort was able to control the battle while facing Harry's and Dumbledores Phoenix, Harry, Neville, and Albus himself.
You've literally made all the good guys super weak. And the death eaters are all superpowered.
I honestly wish I could see how you were picturing the battle, because I just felt embarrassment that you thought this was good material.
Your stuff definitely isn't worth paying for if you can't even write battle scenes that make sense. Voldemort was able to control the battle while facing Harry's and Dumbledores Phoenix, Harry, Neville, and Albus himself.
You've literally made all the good guys super weak. And the death eaters are all superpowered.
I honestly wish I could see how you were picturing the battle, because I just felt embarrassment that you thought this was good material.
3/11 c106 
1UzuShiro
fuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Increíble capitulo, realmente te luciste.
estoy ansioso por mas, realmente quiero la conversación de Harry con Dumbledore.
1UzuShirofuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Increíble capitulo, realmente te luciste.
estoy ansioso por mas, realmente quiero la conversación de Harry con Dumbledore.
3/7 c105 Darkendlight74
Wow this has been a crazy ride. Are we nearing the end or just the end of this part of the saga?
Wow this has been a crazy ride. Are we nearing the end or just the end of this part of the saga?
3/4 c105 17griffin blackwood
Thank goodness. I’m Mainly sticking with this because I want to see how it ends but a lot of this arc in particular just felt like you have been trying to hit a word milestone.
I fell in love with the story for how well your writing flowed and expanded the world but a lot of the heart and soul of what made it such a strong fic in the beginning really feels traded away.
Molly Weasley continues to be one of the only characters I respect and I normally hate her. You have skill and talent but this is starting to the way of prince of Slytherin and becoming overly wordy for no added benefit other than story length
17griffin blackwoodThank goodness. I’m Mainly sticking with this because I want to see how it ends but a lot of this arc in particular just felt like you have been trying to hit a word milestone.
I fell in love with the story for how well your writing flowed and expanded the world but a lot of the heart and soul of what made it such a strong fic in the beginning really feels traded away.
Molly Weasley continues to be one of the only characters I respect and I normally hate her. You have skill and talent but this is starting to the way of prince of Slytherin and becoming overly wordy for no added benefit other than story length
3/3 c105 1UzuShiro
gran capitulo, me dejo con muchas ansias por el siguiente, cada ves se pone mas interesante.
1UzuShirogran capitulo, me dejo con muchas ansias por el siguiente, cada ves se pone mas interesante.
2/23 c25 Guest
25 chapters in and im fucking to board to read any more story going to slow plus way to much fing negativity. it just keeps building till i have say no more!
25 chapters in and im fucking to board to read any more story going to slow plus way to much fing negativity. it just keeps building till i have say no more!
2/20 c104 Sunny JS
Can we please get regular updates, especially if you've pre written them?
Also, what I say isn't gonna change much, but I find your decision strange in that you've made Voldy's team incredibly competent, but then the others slightly above average.
I mean I like the fact you've made Malfoy a formidable duelist, but then why have you made Remus - someone who's good enough for Dumbledore - a weaker fighter. Also, Bellatrix is months out of prison, but she seems soo spry compared to Sirius.
It just seems you're making things a lot harder.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next.
Can we please get regular updates, especially if you've pre written them?
Also, what I say isn't gonna change much, but I find your decision strange in that you've made Voldy's team incredibly competent, but then the others slightly above average.
I mean I like the fact you've made Malfoy a formidable duelist, but then why have you made Remus - someone who's good enough for Dumbledore - a weaker fighter. Also, Bellatrix is months out of prison, but she seems soo spry compared to Sirius.
It just seems you're making things a lot harder.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next.
2/22 c104 2Gabilian
I have to say that I have no idea what happened in these last couple of chapters other than endless convoluted fighting scenes that make no sense, are entirely unrealistic, and are completely unnecessary to the story. Please move the story forward. Usually less is more, especially when it comes to the fight scenes. G.
2GabilianI have to say that I have no idea what happened in these last couple of chapters other than endless convoluted fighting scenes that make no sense, are entirely unrealistic, and are completely unnecessary to the story. Please move the story forward. Usually less is more, especially when it comes to the fight scenes. G.
2/20 c104 Guest
whats the ship is it harry/daphne
whats the ship is it harry/daphne