2/19 c104 17griffin blackwood
Interesting! It’s really starting to drag in places but I’m glad your making progress
Interesting! It’s really starting to drag in places but I’m glad your making progress
2/10 c103 Beyondthesea16
nice update, well if nothing else at least the Weasley's are being saved but what about the rest, waiting for more
nice update, well if nothing else at least the Weasley's are being saved but what about the rest, waiting for more
2/9 c1 Guest
Your updates are getting later and later. Are the cliffhangers not enough?
Your updates are getting later and later. Are the cliffhangers not enough?
2/4 c102 Beyondthesea16
nice update, at least fred is alive and hopefully he will get better, waiting for more
nice update, at least fred is alive and hopefully he will get better, waiting for more
2/3 c102 phoenix-rob
This is the most amazing, intriguing, and plot twiting stories. Just love it and can't wait for the next update.
This is the most amazing, intriguing, and plot twiting stories. Just love it and can't wait for the next update.
2/1 c56 Guest
this shit is actual ass. The same generic bullshit. Do better
this shit is actual ass. The same generic bullshit. Do better
2/2 c102 1Against Fate
This chapter showcases EVERYTHING the story COULD have been had you cut on the needless angstfest and dislikeable portrayal of… well, everybody until the last 10 or so chapters.
Bedivere is a damn stud, Dumbledore is badass and Tom is a behemoth. Pity the rest of your story could not hold me due to the ovrblown angst, meaning I have skimmed throuh most of the story after my last comment… but I said it before and I will say it again, you are a helluva writer. Really good one. You just need… dunno, a hug or something.
You know the story is overblown dark-angsty and characters too unlikeable when it makes Renegade Cause by Silens Cursor feel rosy and chill
This chapter showcases EVERYTHING the story COULD have been had you cut on the needless angstfest and dislikeable portrayal of… well, everybody until the last 10 or so chapters.
Bedivere is a damn stud, Dumbledore is badass and Tom is a behemoth. Pity the rest of your story could not hold me due to the ovrblown angst, meaning I have skimmed throuh most of the story after my last comment… but I said it before and I will say it again, you are a helluva writer. Really good one. You just need… dunno, a hug or something.
You know the story is overblown dark-angsty and characters too unlikeable when it makes Renegade Cause by Silens Cursor feel rosy and chill
2/1 c102 17griffin blackwood
Poor free. But I hope Molly isn’t walking into danger either considering she’s one of the only decent adults in this fic
Poor free. But I hope Molly isn’t walking into danger either considering she’s one of the only decent adults in this fic
1/30 c1 Guest
can't wait anymore for the next chapter buddy. pls deliver.
can't wait anymore for the next chapter buddy. pls deliver.