for Birth of the Viper10/13/2021 c1 
15Data Seeker
Hi
Great story. The plot with Captain America getting a call from Viper in prison was a good beginning.
The middle where Cap meets Viper in the Prison Vault and she reveals her past to why she hates people like him was great.
The ending was great with a good gag woven in.
The quality is good in many areas, good narration, depth, complexity, scope and detail. The trivia about prison protocols, politics, war and tragedy was good.
You really captured their characters. Cap is one of the good guys, and Viper is evil, but shows potential for change. Other characters are good too.
This is what I think of the wholesome standards.
The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
I hope you like this review. God bless
Data Seeker
15Data SeekerHi
Great story. The plot with Captain America getting a call from Viper in prison was a good beginning.
The middle where Cap meets Viper in the Prison Vault and she reveals her past to why she hates people like him was great.
The ending was great with a good gag woven in.
The quality is good in many areas, good narration, depth, complexity, scope and detail. The trivia about prison protocols, politics, war and tragedy was good.
You really captured their characters. Cap is one of the good guys, and Viper is evil, but shows potential for change. Other characters are good too.
This is what I think of the wholesome standards.
The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
I hope you like this review. God bless
Data Seeker