for A World Away5/17 c37 loboleona1111
Such an amazing story! I love how Harry is characterized in this story and how he goes about his life!
Ciri is such an amazing person for him in this and love the shared mindscape idea.
I hope you continue to keep writing as I am more then willing to continue reading!
Such an amazing story! I love how Harry is characterized in this story and how he goes about his life!
Ciri is such an amazing person for him in this and love the shared mindscape idea.
I hope you continue to keep writing as I am more then willing to continue reading!
5/13 c37 Guest
Someone is plagiarising your story "Swallow and the Dragon" in a different name in Webnovel. Calling it "Harry Potter in Witcher" by Yggdrasil Loki.
Someone is plagiarising your story "Swallow and the Dragon" in a different name in Webnovel. Calling it "Harry Potter in Witcher" by Yggdrasil Loki.
3/23 c37 ulttoanova
I really like this story, I don't have much else to say at the moment other than that I'm looking forward to more... and that I kind of want harry to make a lightning spell, he was mentioned doing some lightning wandlessly earlier but that hasn't appeared in a lot of chapters.
I really like this story, I don't have much else to say at the moment other than that I'm looking forward to more... and that I kind of want harry to make a lightning spell, he was mentioned doing some lightning wandlessly earlier but that hasn't appeared in a lot of chapters.
3/22 c20 Randynotsosavag
Once again pretty great story so far keep up the good work and all that jazz! Also quite good honestly pretty great can't wait to see more. I really like how you're not just having hairy evolve in the story but you're having everyone else evolve as well. Both in Might and Magic. My only gripe is that the lady of space and time didn't tell the white wolf about her pocket mage. I mean geralt of Rivia is pretty chill with a lot of things so he'd probably be cool with it. I'm also fairly sure at no point did the fake stuttering teacher ever actually truly grab the actual skin of Harry so that guy or gal Mutant Ascension really needs to do a reread or at least not ignore the details on the writing. From what I do remember it was the possessed teacher just grabbing Harry's clothing and bunching it up and almost actively avoiding touching Harry directly. Anyways great stories so far keep up the good work and all that jazz! Have a great morning or afternoon or night or whenever you get this!
Once again pretty great story so far keep up the good work and all that jazz! Also quite good honestly pretty great can't wait to see more. I really like how you're not just having hairy evolve in the story but you're having everyone else evolve as well. Both in Might and Magic. My only gripe is that the lady of space and time didn't tell the white wolf about her pocket mage. I mean geralt of Rivia is pretty chill with a lot of things so he'd probably be cool with it. I'm also fairly sure at no point did the fake stuttering teacher ever actually truly grab the actual skin of Harry so that guy or gal Mutant Ascension really needs to do a reread or at least not ignore the details on the writing. From what I do remember it was the possessed teacher just grabbing Harry's clothing and bunching it up and almost actively avoiding touching Harry directly. Anyways great stories so far keep up the good work and all that jazz! Have a great morning or afternoon or night or whenever you get this!
3/22 c15 Mutant Ascension
So how is quarrel able to touch Harry without being burnt? Or did you forget that the protection that his mother placed on his skin in his blood is still very much there?
So how is quarrel able to touch Harry without being burnt? Or did you forget that the protection that his mother placed on his skin in his blood is still very much there?
3/17 c12 Randynotsosavag
Hey Arthur I just want you to know wonderful Story So Far can't wait to see what else you do with it! However I'm going to get to the point I and a bunch of others probably just want to know if you're alive and okay. I mean yeah last update wasn't that long ago in the grand scheme of things but it has been quite a bit at the same time. This is both a asking if there's going to be another update check and a wellness check.
Hey Arthur I just want you to know wonderful Story So Far can't wait to see what else you do with it! However I'm going to get to the point I and a bunch of others probably just want to know if you're alive and okay. I mean yeah last update wasn't that long ago in the grand scheme of things but it has been quite a bit at the same time. This is both a asking if there's going to be another update check and a wellness check.
3/12 c7 Mutant Ascension
Here we go again with this nonsense, It's been years now since J.K.R Made it perfectly clear that The only ones in the world of Harry Potter that rely on wands to use magic is Europeans and Americans. For like 90% of the magical world witches and wizards use wandless magic, they see wands as useful tools but prefer to use Wandless magic. All the magical schools around the world except for the ones in Europe and America teach their students how to use Wandless magic, They don't use wand and they don't use any other external focus.
Even without J.K.R Saying what you did it is stupid to think that they would need some external item in order to use the power they are born with they're literally born with magic flowing through every single cell in their body why would they need an external item to use that power? How does that make any sense fanfiction writers need to stop looking for facts in other fan fiction at least read the source material first before you come to the conclusion of the things you need to change. In the freaking books every single witch or wizard performs accidental magic so why would it be possible to use magic without any external item as a child and yet for some reason when they become adults they're unable to do the same thing how does that make any sense?
Here we go again with this nonsense, It's been years now since J.K.R Made it perfectly clear that The only ones in the world of Harry Potter that rely on wands to use magic is Europeans and Americans. For like 90% of the magical world witches and wizards use wandless magic, they see wands as useful tools but prefer to use Wandless magic. All the magical schools around the world except for the ones in Europe and America teach their students how to use Wandless magic, They don't use wand and they don't use any other external focus.
Even without J.K.R Saying what you did it is stupid to think that they would need some external item in order to use the power they are born with they're literally born with magic flowing through every single cell in their body why would they need an external item to use that power? How does that make any sense fanfiction writers need to stop looking for facts in other fan fiction at least read the source material first before you come to the conclusion of the things you need to change. In the freaking books every single witch or wizard performs accidental magic so why would it be possible to use magic without any external item as a child and yet for some reason when they become adults they're unable to do the same thing how does that make any sense?
3/5 c37 Guest
Ohkay, im hooked. I just binge-read it all and need some more. So please go on, the story has a splendid flow. :D Sendind love and well-wishes.
Ohkay, im hooked. I just binge-read it all and need some more. So please go on, the story has a splendid flow. :D Sendind love and well-wishes.
1/27 c16 DrCoogans
Really enjoying your story man and i read the comments from pincho, some people don’t appreciate world building but for something like Harry Potter/The witcher that goes a long way. Personally im hoping this ends up being a really long story and goes into a lot of depth! Keep up the good work!
Really enjoying your story man and i read the comments from pincho, some people don’t appreciate world building but for something like Harry Potter/The witcher that goes a long way. Personally im hoping this ends up being a really long story and goes into a lot of depth! Keep up the good work!
1/25 c12 pincho
Ok I am done. This chapter unfortunately killed the last of my interest.
Hope all is well for you in this new year, and hope to see the white boy story continued one day.
Ok I am done. This chapter unfortunately killed the last of my interest.
Hope all is well for you in this new year, and hope to see the white boy story continued one day.
1/25 c11 pincho
I honestly hope the rest of the story doesn't drag on so long. I'm sorry I am just finding this extremely boring. It's like a slow slice of life with pieces missing here and there because it was either not thought of, deemed unimportant, or would derail your take on canon plot line.
Quite frankly I wish you were back writing the HP/MCU story. It had details but moved steadily along always progressing.
I honestly hope the rest of the story doesn't drag on so long. I'm sorry I am just finding this extremely boring. It's like a slow slice of life with pieces missing here and there because it was either not thought of, deemed unimportant, or would derail your take on canon plot line.
Quite frankly I wish you were back writing the HP/MCU story. It had details but moved steadily along always progressing.
1/25 c11 pincho
Wizards that don't work at the bank or get permission are not allowed to do magic in the bank.
Dumbledore told him before pulling a sack out of his robes as well as his wand. With a quick wave, coins from various stacks started floating before flying over and started to quickly fill the sack.
Wizards that don't work at the bank or get permission are not allowed to do magic in the bank.
Dumbledore told him before pulling a sack out of his robes as well as his wand. With a quick wave, coins from various stacks started floating before flying over and started to quickly fill the sack.
1/25 c10 pincho
Soo it only took Dumbles a year and a half to tell Harry anything of import about his family.
You can, as a matter of fact. As the last living member of the Potter line, you are allowed to take up the headship at the age of 13 which will give you full control of your estate should you wish it. Yo
Soo it only took Dumbles a year and a half to tell Harry anything of import about his family.
You can, as a matter of fact. As the last living member of the Potter line, you are allowed to take up the headship at the age of 13 which will give you full control of your estate should you wish it. Yo