for Jaune 'Acnologia' Arc(Hiatus)3/25/2023 c1 Guest
Hay demasiadas historias como esta, ya sea Fanfiction de RWBY o unos Crossover entre Star Wars y RWBY con Jaune como personaje y como protagonista así qué escribe algo distinto
Hay demasiadas historias como esta, ya sea Fanfiction de RWBY o unos Crossover entre Star Wars y RWBY con Jaune como personaje y como protagonista así qué escribe algo distinto
7/4/2022 c5 christianholifield2
Lets go we found Zoro’s great great great great great great great great great great grandchild
Lets go we found Zoro’s great great great great great great great great great great grandchild
5/12/2022 c9 ZonZus
Ok let me see if I get this. You thought you could write a Fanfiction in a crossover of 2 series you know little to nothing about?
Ok let me see if I get this. You thought you could write a Fanfiction in a crossover of 2 series you know little to nothing about?
5/11/2022 c9 
1Archangel Xireon Chaos God
tbh. besides the dragon queen...I'd NOT add any anybody from Fairy Tailverse. A
ot less research. and alot less hectic. I meshes better. and don't havta focus on multiple genres from two different animes.
1Archangel Xireon Chaos Godtbh. besides the dragon queen...I'd NOT add any anybody from Fairy Tailverse. A
ot less research. and alot less hectic. I meshes better. and don't havta focus on multiple genres from two different animes.
4/2/2022 c13 KINGFRYCHICKEN
Binged it and honestly story’s got a good thing going. Love the premise but honestly though? I was pretty damn disappointed and annoyed that majority of of all the chapters were none chapters.
Not gonna lie but it pretty much ruined the whole experience. But I also think it’s kinda crazy how you haven’t watched a single episode and still wrote this. And it ain’t even that bad! In fact I think it’s good!
Making me think just how good things will be once your done watching both anime’s. RWBY’s episodes are short af compared to Fairy tail imo. So RWBY’s without a doubt easy to be finished on a later date. Though Fairy tail do be having TONS of episodes to watch lmao!
Looking forward to the next chapter! Whenever that may be lol!
P.S. please keep the non chapters to a minimum. If you do have a poll you wanna use to introduce new ideas and see what some might want in the future and what not. I do suggest in putting them under the entire chapter so as to not have majority of your fic’s chapters taken up by non chapters. A few sure, but when it takes 7/13 chapters which is a little over 50%, it can be quite jarring.
That being said! Keep up the good work!
Binged it and honestly story’s got a good thing going. Love the premise but honestly though? I was pretty damn disappointed and annoyed that majority of of all the chapters were none chapters.
Not gonna lie but it pretty much ruined the whole experience. But I also think it’s kinda crazy how you haven’t watched a single episode and still wrote this. And it ain’t even that bad! In fact I think it’s good!
Making me think just how good things will be once your done watching both anime’s. RWBY’s episodes are short af compared to Fairy tail imo. So RWBY’s without a doubt easy to be finished on a later date. Though Fairy tail do be having TONS of episodes to watch lmao!
Looking forward to the next chapter! Whenever that may be lol!
P.S. please keep the non chapters to a minimum. If you do have a poll you wanna use to introduce new ideas and see what some might want in the future and what not. I do suggest in putting them under the entire chapter so as to not have majority of your fic’s chapters taken up by non chapters. A few sure, but when it takes 7/13 chapters which is a little over 50%, it can be quite jarring.
That being said! Keep up the good work!
1/22/2022 c9 Guest
Fucking waste of a chapters dumbass of an author
Fucking waste of a chapters dumbass of an author
1/20/2022 c12 1Archangel Xireon Chaos God
too many people do that and screw themselves tryin to keep up with what was added. just go with what u have already. as long as there are surprises, most of ur readers won't care. We read fanfics cause we are tired of the same Canon plot which we see goin on crunchyroll and YouTube, only to find we can't find anything new. it like watching the same episode of SpongeBob. Over. And Over. And Over. And Over. And Over...for. Ever. That's Knightmare Fuel.
1Archangel Xireon Chaos Godtoo many people do that and screw themselves tryin to keep up with what was added. just go with what u have already. as long as there are surprises, most of ur readers won't care. We read fanfics cause we are tired of the same Canon plot which we see goin on crunchyroll and YouTube, only to find we can't find anything new. it like watching the same episode of SpongeBob. Over. And Over. And Over. And Over. And Over...for. Ever. That's Knightmare Fuel.
1/20/2022 c13 1Nesthor5000
Oz as leader resembles a fusion of Dumbledore's (Harry Potter) manipulations and information concealment, Celestia's incompetence (MLP), treating others as replaceable chess pieces like Magneto (X-Men). For example, Oz did not place a single selection mechanism to the power of the maidens in dying (spoilers if each and every one of them appeared), he made Remnant dependent on the hunters and the atlas troops, he kept exaggeratedly secret information from Salem that he could have used for strategies, Beacon had a hideous computer security system and to top it all he entrusted the fate of the human and Faun race to kids with quirky fashion senses and weapons bigger than their own bodies. I also don't know how Oz didn't think of sealing Salem, throwing her into space or better yet a black hole, locking her in a pocket dimension or a way to permanently eliminate the Grimms, had the relic of destruction could have used it to strip Salem of his army of Grimms but foolishly decided to hide it like the other relics. But the point is that I say, if I had a coin for every time ozpin wasted an opportunity to destroy salem and / or the grimms would have enough to buy me a pizza.
The way I see it, Oz is on the wrong foot of losing his war against his ex-wife Salem. Salem has brought the silver-eyed warriors to the brink of extinction, has made the Grimms have almost the entire territory of the planet to themselves, has developed a method to steal the magic of others (grimm parasite), has created hybrid eyed warriors Silver Plated-Grimm (Hound of volume 8), has cut communications between kingdoms, already has a plan to end the forces of Oz for good. Oz has made the following mistakes that have cost Remmant and his people too much, such as: -Gift most of his magical powers to 4 people without having a method to make sure whoever inherits them is trustworthy or get them back. -Hidden too much crucial information even from his closest allies -He has made Remmant too dependent on his guide and if something happens to him the line of command is almost broken. -He has been too focused on finding a way to destroy Salem that he has not thought of other ways to permanently defeat her such as sealing her, locking her in a pocket dimension (the vaults) or launching her into outer space. My theory of how the Dust originated are 3: -They are a fossil fuel that originated from the remnants of Remmant's first magical humanity. -They are the remains of the moon charged with the magical energy of the god of darkness -They are the crystallized accumulation of magic energy that is in the environment or Remmant's magic ley lines without using it. On the origin of the Aura it seems like a combination of reinforcement and protection spells plus a specialized spell (Semblance)
1Nesthor5000Oz as leader resembles a fusion of Dumbledore's (Harry Potter) manipulations and information concealment, Celestia's incompetence (MLP), treating others as replaceable chess pieces like Magneto (X-Men). For example, Oz did not place a single selection mechanism to the power of the maidens in dying (spoilers if each and every one of them appeared), he made Remnant dependent on the hunters and the atlas troops, he kept exaggeratedly secret information from Salem that he could have used for strategies, Beacon had a hideous computer security system and to top it all he entrusted the fate of the human and Faun race to kids with quirky fashion senses and weapons bigger than their own bodies. I also don't know how Oz didn't think of sealing Salem, throwing her into space or better yet a black hole, locking her in a pocket dimension or a way to permanently eliminate the Grimms, had the relic of destruction could have used it to strip Salem of his army of Grimms but foolishly decided to hide it like the other relics. But the point is that I say, if I had a coin for every time ozpin wasted an opportunity to destroy salem and / or the grimms would have enough to buy me a pizza.
The way I see it, Oz is on the wrong foot of losing his war against his ex-wife Salem. Salem has brought the silver-eyed warriors to the brink of extinction, has made the Grimms have almost the entire territory of the planet to themselves, has developed a method to steal the magic of others (grimm parasite), has created hybrid eyed warriors Silver Plated-Grimm (Hound of volume 8), has cut communications between kingdoms, already has a plan to end the forces of Oz for good. Oz has made the following mistakes that have cost Remmant and his people too much, such as: -Gift most of his magical powers to 4 people without having a method to make sure whoever inherits them is trustworthy or get them back. -Hidden too much crucial information even from his closest allies -He has made Remmant too dependent on his guide and if something happens to him the line of command is almost broken. -He has been too focused on finding a way to destroy Salem that he has not thought of other ways to permanently defeat her such as sealing her, locking her in a pocket dimension (the vaults) or launching her into outer space. My theory of how the Dust originated are 3: -They are a fossil fuel that originated from the remnants of Remmant's first magical humanity. -They are the remains of the moon charged with the magical energy of the god of darkness -They are the crystallized accumulation of magic energy that is in the environment or Remmant's magic ley lines without using it. On the origin of the Aura it seems like a combination of reinforcement and protection spells plus a specialized spell (Semblance)