for Just a Shinobi6/2 c15 mrasmunrasmunr
Do you want me to die of suspense?
Damnit man haw could you
dangling this infront of me but not giving me the rest(π_π)
Do you want me to die of suspense?
Damnit man haw could you
dangling this infront of me but not giving me the rest(π_π)
5/13 c8 Lakyas
… Esdeath huh, I’d have preferred you just make Rei her own character instead of just giving her an already established identity for her vigilante get up this just feels so uninspired and cheap compared to everything else you had going on.
… Esdeath huh, I’d have preferred you just make Rei her own character instead of just giving her an already established identity for her vigilante get up this just feels so uninspired and cheap compared to everything else you had going on.
4/27 c6 Illuminated2
I discovered your story today! I always randomly discover your stories and devour them immediately and completely. This one is as good as all the rest, so it looks like I will be getting less sleep! Thank you for continuing to write and trying new things.
I discovered your story today! I always randomly discover your stories and devour them immediately and completely. This one is as good as all the rest, so it looks like I will be getting less sleep! Thank you for continuing to write and trying new things.
4/25 c15 ShagLadd
Yo Neon. ShagLadd. Good ta see ya.
A few things happened here that I wanna mention.
1. Naruto "Talk-No-Jutsu" Uzumaki NOT good at SPEECHES? ... Somehow fits. He's a passionate sore of the moment kinda guy.
2. He said that stuff, bro. The best shit because it's REAL Shit. Nice work.
3. These little tender touches: the familial moments, Tenko's fanboying, Toya's contrarianism & the harmless bickering banter, reassuring Fuyumi & Natsuo, lovely stuff.
4. I won't lie: Knowing that "Mirko Calling Shit's Fucked", Her being a Brat (more than likely wanting daddy to discipline her) & passing a warning of Ryukyu & All Might on his ass since the HPSC ain't shit, Naruto laughing because, "Fuck it, might as well happen." while chomping at the bit & spoiling for a fight? Then "Who wants Ice Cream before I Brawl a Dragon?" THAT was a Fucking EXCELLENT touch.
I can't wait to see more.
Much Love,
ShagLadd
Yo Neon. ShagLadd. Good ta see ya.
A few things happened here that I wanna mention.
1. Naruto "Talk-No-Jutsu" Uzumaki NOT good at SPEECHES? ... Somehow fits. He's a passionate sore of the moment kinda guy.
2. He said that stuff, bro. The best shit because it's REAL Shit. Nice work.
3. These little tender touches: the familial moments, Tenko's fanboying, Toya's contrarianism & the harmless bickering banter, reassuring Fuyumi & Natsuo, lovely stuff.
4. I won't lie: Knowing that "Mirko Calling Shit's Fucked", Her being a Brat (more than likely wanting daddy to discipline her) & passing a warning of Ryukyu & All Might on his ass since the HPSC ain't shit, Naruto laughing because, "Fuck it, might as well happen." while chomping at the bit & spoiling for a fight? Then "Who wants Ice Cream before I Brawl a Dragon?" THAT was a Fucking EXCELLENT touch.
I can't wait to see more.
Much Love,
ShagLadd
4/22 c14 Sakumon16
Well, as long as this doesn’t get too explicit. Your stories are some of the few with sexual content that I don’t mind
Well, as long as this doesn’t get too explicit. Your stories are some of the few with sexual content that I don’t mind