for Stumbling through Godhood9/21/2024 c26 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun little test with getting the magicals in shape and seeing whats going to happen
will be fun to see what his goa'uld friend will think of the changes in his realm
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun little test with getting the magicals in shape and seeing whats going to happen
will be fun to see what his goa'uld friend will think of the changes in his realm
9/21/2024 c26 
5Grafian
Hmm. While I do like the story, it seems strange he is dead set on cosplaying as a Goa'uld. Seems much more sensible to just spend some time tracking down a habitable planet either off the Stargate network, or just unknown to the Goa'uld. Followed by killing a few low level Goa'uld and using their ships to gradually transport their serfs and Jaffa over to his new, safe domain so he can build up in peace and quiet instead of needing to toe Ra's line until he gets shanked by Earth. Followed by needing to toe the line of the various System Lords in their Cold to not so Cold Civil War. Yes it's more work, but it also allows him to make a far more secure foundation geared towards rapid growth and integration of multiversal people, abilities and technologies rather than, again, needing to cosplay as a bog standard, bargain bin discount, loser Goa'uld.
5GrafianHmm. While I do like the story, it seems strange he is dead set on cosplaying as a Goa'uld. Seems much more sensible to just spend some time tracking down a habitable planet either off the Stargate network, or just unknown to the Goa'uld. Followed by killing a few low level Goa'uld and using their ships to gradually transport their serfs and Jaffa over to his new, safe domain so he can build up in peace and quiet instead of needing to toe Ra's line until he gets shanked by Earth. Followed by needing to toe the line of the various System Lords in their Cold to not so Cold Civil War. Yes it's more work, but it also allows him to make a far more secure foundation geared towards rapid growth and integration of multiversal people, abilities and technologies rather than, again, needing to cosplay as a bog standard, bargain bin discount, loser Goa'uld.
9/21/2024 c26 Maverick123214685
If he wants to survive then needs to play goa’uld. So I’d say, build a palace for this tavaris. Put it on an out of the way continent, maybe inside a mountain (like erebor or Moria, but with more lighting) connected to his capital with a ring transporter (having it hidden could help of tavaris needs to hide). It doesn’t need to be naquada, just build it with stone, a shiny marble look would help make the interior look posh and rich, without the precious metal cost.
If he wants to survive then needs to play goa’uld. So I’d say, build a palace for this tavaris. Put it on an out of the way continent, maybe inside a mountain (like erebor or Moria, but with more lighting) connected to his capital with a ring transporter (having it hidden could help of tavaris needs to hide). It doesn’t need to be naquada, just build it with stone, a shiny marble look would help make the interior look posh and rich, without the precious metal cost.
9/20/2024 c26 1Kulha
I'm always up for world-building in this fic. However, it does seem weird that he didn't expand his outside help in all this time. It's better to get stuff set up early so they can grow as much as possible in the short time he has.
1KulhaI'm always up for world-building in this fic. However, it does seem weird that he didn't expand his outside help in all this time. It's better to get stuff set up early so they can grow as much as possible in the short time he has.
9/20/2024 c26 Da wall
I am enjoying the story. I think him stealing the ship from that second Guyver movie would be awesome. It has the ability to manufacture more armor units on board that are revealed at the end of the movie. Just before the hero sends the ship off into random deep space, so no one can have it. He could also record the stargate addresses on Abados. Apparently there are just oodles of treasures. That Rah is too lazy to go collect. The knowledge database of the Ancients, the quantum mirror as well as a non evil Queen that he could put in his future girlfriend or wife, if they like each other. That would also give him a well established spy, assassin, thief, sabbatore, information network in her children. That's already waiting for an Empire. Then there's making contact with the Marvel Cinematic Universes Asgard as well as the Dwarfs in that universe. Who can make a byfrost bridge and bind it to a weapon. A weapon that he could carry anywhere with him and use to teleport armies across an entire universe.
Please don't just give the Jaffh staff weapon versions of rifles or machine guns. Everybody does that gets kind of boring. And their culture isn't really geared for it, especially with the way they train. Maybe give them a spear with a large leaf shaped blade, that fires a faster more condensed plasma projectile. It could have several modes of fire. Like single shot, rapid shot, even a beam setting. Since the Goa'uld have mind interface technology instead of iron sights on a (spear), you can basically just have it interface with the holder's mind for better aiming and targeting solutions. That's something I don't think anyone has ever done in any fan fiction so far.
I am enjoying the story. I think him stealing the ship from that second Guyver movie would be awesome. It has the ability to manufacture more armor units on board that are revealed at the end of the movie. Just before the hero sends the ship off into random deep space, so no one can have it. He could also record the stargate addresses on Abados. Apparently there are just oodles of treasures. That Rah is too lazy to go collect. The knowledge database of the Ancients, the quantum mirror as well as a non evil Queen that he could put in his future girlfriend or wife, if they like each other. That would also give him a well established spy, assassin, thief, sabbatore, information network in her children. That's already waiting for an Empire. Then there's making contact with the Marvel Cinematic Universes Asgard as well as the Dwarfs in that universe. Who can make a byfrost bridge and bind it to a weapon. A weapon that he could carry anywhere with him and use to teleport armies across an entire universe.
Please don't just give the Jaffh staff weapon versions of rifles or machine guns. Everybody does that gets kind of boring. And their culture isn't really geared for it, especially with the way they train. Maybe give them a spear with a large leaf shaped blade, that fires a faster more condensed plasma projectile. It could have several modes of fire. Like single shot, rapid shot, even a beam setting. Since the Goa'uld have mind interface technology instead of iron sights on a (spear), you can basically just have it interface with the holder's mind for better aiming and targeting solutions. That's something I don't think anyone has ever done in any fan fiction so far.
9/15/2024 c25 Azriel Legnasia
I've been enjoying your story for some time now and I thought that I would point you in the direction of the live action Guyver movies. The second one in particular has a ship with at least 1 Guyver unit aboard, I'll leave you to work out the details there. In addition to that, if you're interested in Darrow adding the Force to his repertoire you might look into the Valley of the Jedi from Dark Forces 2 Jedi Outcast. I know that you are limiting yourself to live action, and video games would tend to fall outside of that pervue, Dark Forces 2 utilizes FMV sequences with live action actors and Jedi Outcast Outcast is merely further along the timeline though I doubt the need to go so far, I merely brought it up in order to to point out the possibilities. If you're interested I'd suggest watching a cutscene compilation in order to get the gist of it.
I've been enjoying your story for some time now and I thought that I would point you in the direction of the live action Guyver movies. The second one in particular has a ship with at least 1 Guyver unit aboard, I'll leave you to work out the details there. In addition to that, if you're interested in Darrow adding the Force to his repertoire you might look into the Valley of the Jedi from Dark Forces 2 Jedi Outcast. I know that you are limiting yourself to live action, and video games would tend to fall outside of that pervue, Dark Forces 2 utilizes FMV sequences with live action actors and Jedi Outcast Outcast is merely further along the timeline though I doubt the need to go so far, I merely brought it up in order to to point out the possibilities. If you're interested I'd suggest watching a cutscene compilation in order to get the gist of it.
9/2/2024 c25 Guest
NGL I skipped everything that wasn't about Stargate, only leaves around 30 mins of reading time
NGL I skipped everything that wasn't about Stargate, only leaves around 30 mins of reading time
7/30/2024 c13 2Tepheris
Is that shoulder dislocation quip from experience? That seems a little random to throw in otherwise.
2TepherisIs that shoulder dislocation quip from experience? That seems a little random to throw in otherwise.
6/21/2024 c15 4Wackuhdoodle
The boy was hopefully NOT sultry, but instead sulky. There is a very large difference in the meanings of those two words
4WackuhdoodleThe boy was hopefully NOT sultry, but instead sulky. There is a very large difference in the meanings of those two words
6/11/2024 c25 sandfair221
Haha this has been too too good. Please whatever you do don't let this die anytime soon. For me just SG-1 and HP as primary universes and brief excursions into other worlds seem to fit this fic best. A good many people seem to be mistaking this as a classic JumpChain. I personally was enjoying the pace and never really got bored of HP.
I really really look forward to SG-1 or Teal'c expecting a classical false god and meeting Darrow.
Haha this has been too too good. Please whatever you do don't let this die anytime soon. For me just SG-1 and HP as primary universes and brief excursions into other worlds seem to fit this fic best. A good many people seem to be mistaking this as a classic JumpChain. I personally was enjoying the pace and never really got bored of HP.
I really really look forward to SG-1 or Teal'c expecting a classical false god and meeting Darrow.