for Harry and Dudley do the apocalypse6/1/2022 c1 
2SEXandDRUGS
Why have you still not fixed this? About time to take it down if you aren’t going to fix it
2SEXandDRUGSWhy have you still not fixed this? About time to take it down if you aren’t going to fix it
11/20/2021 c1 wth
Either fix this unreadable BS or take it down.
Either fix this unreadable BS or take it down.
11/16/2021 c1 4mistsnight
looks promising and interesting hopefully the font can be fixed and a new chapter will be coming soon
4mistsnightlooks promising and interesting hopefully the font can be fixed and a new chapter will be coming soon
10/26/2021 c1 Elfin69
this actually sounds really good and i hope that you will continue it. you will need to adjust it of course to take out all the formatting. What about his vaults and will Sirius still be alive and him and Remus go with him and will he make sure that have a magical tent and trunks to help him to survive.
this actually sounds really good and i hope that you will continue it. you will need to adjust it of course to take out all the formatting. What about his vaults and will Sirius still be alive and him and Remus go with him and will he make sure that have a magical tent and trunks to help him to survive.
10/6/2021 c1 Guest
que terrible, revisa el formato con que subiste el cap, por favor
que terrible, revisa el formato con que subiste el cap, por favor
10/4/2021 c1 killernooch
I know you've already gotten comments about the text so I won't say anything about that but this looks promising and I can't wait to see what you do with it
I know you've already gotten comments about the text so I won't say anything about that but this looks promising and I can't wait to see what you do with it
10/2/2021 c1 Ikaden
I just thought you should know that the page is full of formatting text and is unreadable
I just thought you should know that the page is full of formatting text and is unreadable
10/1/2021 c1 Rainraven
OK, I really like the idea for this and and your writing is good. Could you come back to it and filter out all of the...ummm...editing stuff like the type of font and style things? I managed but it was a bit difficult.
Have Kudos for such a wonderful idea and writing. I hope to see some more of this, eventually.
OK, I really like the idea for this and and your writing is good. Could you come back to it and filter out all of the...ummm...editing stuff like the type of font and style things? I managed but it was a bit difficult.
Have Kudos for such a wonderful idea and writing. I hope to see some more of this, eventually.