
7h c11 Glitner
cant help but notice you made zeo and runeas mother and son ? ... i dont know if you just wanted it so but if you dont know then im telling it anyway , runeas is zeos grandmother and his actual mother is still alive
cant help but notice you made zeo and runeas mother and son ? ... i dont know if you just wanted it so but if you dont know then im telling it anyway , runeas is zeos grandmother and his actual mother is still alive
4/14 c15 cHaZzi123
Love that you are re-writing this story! Definitely enjoying the changes, thanks :D
Love that you are re-writing this story! Definitely enjoying the changes, thanks :D
4/8 c15 Carlmike94
It was inevitable, but I still wasn't expecting Ophis to move yet. And certainly not like that
It was inevitable, but I still wasn't expecting Ophis to move yet. And certainly not like that
4/8 c11 Re Lovely Lover
Already had the scene where Grayfia told her husband and she was passed off he not only didn't have a problem with it but was happy with it. Only after noticing her expression and quickly throwing in: only if she was okay with it which she forced herself to say yes and fuming over having to tell him he was right.
Now its redoing her telling him this chapter and allowing it while passed off as if first telling him.
Already had the scene where Grayfia told her husband and she was passed off he not only didn't have a problem with it but was happy with it. Only after noticing her expression and quickly throwing in: only if she was okay with it which she forced herself to say yes and fuming over having to tell him he was right.
Now its redoing her telling him this chapter and allowing it while passed off as if first telling him.
4/7 c9 Re Lovely Lover
Yup. This is a well done story for sure. Thiugh again the same problem id hoped would go away with him getting close to others who he wouldn't have to share were now around. In comes Ven and Grayfia who will be Temps he shares.
Great work but damnit I can't stand that sharing cuck crap.
Yup. This is a well done story for sure. Thiugh again the same problem id hoped would go away with him getting close to others who he wouldn't have to share were now around. In comes Ven and Grayfia who will be Temps he shares.
Great work but damnit I can't stand that sharing cuck crap.
4/7 c4 Re Lovely Lover
One thing with this story that's killing it for me is the sharing. Fine if there's going to be cuck characters who are okay with or even like sharing their girl(s). Not a fan of cuck characters but if its not in my face regularly then whatever I guess.
Adding to it though the MC seems to not mind sharing either and having a go at Risers girls and his mom who he has no intention to take for himself. Just screw on the side when her husband isn't. He's basically a cuck to having zero issue sharing with people and is two for two now.
Massively unpleasant.
One thing with this story that's killing it for me is the sharing. Fine if there's going to be cuck characters who are okay with or even like sharing their girl(s). Not a fan of cuck characters but if its not in my face regularly then whatever I guess.
Adding to it though the MC seems to not mind sharing either and having a go at Risers girls and his mom who he has no intention to take for himself. Just screw on the side when her husband isn't. He's basically a cuck to having zero issue sharing with people and is two for two now.
Massively unpleasant.
4/3 c15 cranerobert95
i cant wait to see how kurou will make everyone react how hel"breed" his new faction but i want to know how hell deal with meeting ophis and how
i cant wait to see how kurou will make everyone react how hel"breed" his new faction but i want to know how hell deal with meeting ophis and how
3/31 c15 hidden puppeteer
Nice to see this one updated. Does Kuro intend to bring back any of the extinct houses? I thought that around half of the 72 pillars were supposed to be dead, so if Kuro intends to build his own faction he could bring back daughters of fallen houses to breed the next generation. Or will this have to wait until he can perform the true resurrection?
Nice to see this one updated. Does Kuro intend to bring back any of the extinct houses? I thought that around half of the 72 pillars were supposed to be dead, so if Kuro intends to build his own faction he could bring back daughters of fallen houses to breed the next generation. Or will this have to wait until he can perform the true resurrection?
3/27 c15 Guest
See, that's the most interesting take and usage of Ophis I've ever seen. There's the author I know and love.
See, that's the most interesting take and usage of Ophis I've ever seen. There's the author I know and love.
3/27 c15 Guest
damn kuro is going the big Mom route in DxD
dudes gonna go Father of Monsters
damn kuro is going the big Mom route in DxD
dudes gonna go Father of Monsters