for One Piece Fates Intertwined7/13/2022 c24 devan
stay consistent with the development of the story my brother, because I like luffyxrobin and hopefully your story can reach the arc new world
stay consistent with the development of the story my brother, because I like luffyxrobin and hopefully your story can reach the arc new world
7/13/2022 c23 the protector
Good job, hope you are always healthy and keep updating your story because I like it
Good job, hope you are always healthy and keep updating your story because I like it
7/12/2022 c24 Chronolocked
Imma be honest I am kinda new to the whole one piece fics so I am kinda concerned when Luffy is already in a relationship before they recruit Sanji, cause Sanji sometimes gives off the vibes that he would even be perverted to women that are already married.
Imma be honest I am kinda new to the whole one piece fics so I am kinda concerned when Luffy is already in a relationship before they recruit Sanji, cause Sanji sometimes gives off the vibes that he would even be perverted to women that are already married.
7/3/2022 c1 marquis.shax
I never understood canon with Garp trying to convince Ace and Luffy to become Marines as there's no way in hell that someone like Akainu wouldn't take the chance to kill them both and probably even make it a public spectacle per orders of the Gorosei since Ace is the son of Gol D Roger and Luffy is the son of Monkey D Dragon the leader of the revolutionary army. The best thing that they could do is just live normal lives off the grid, become pirates like they did, or they could join the revolutionary army
I never understood canon with Garp trying to convince Ace and Luffy to become Marines as there's no way in hell that someone like Akainu wouldn't take the chance to kill them both and probably even make it a public spectacle per orders of the Gorosei since Ace is the son of Gol D Roger and Luffy is the son of Monkey D Dragon the leader of the revolutionary army. The best thing that they could do is just live normal lives off the grid, become pirates like they did, or they could join the revolutionary army
7/3/2022 c23 ro781727
What part will Robin play in the fight? Will she use her devil fruit to beat up the nameless multiple pirates who serve Don Krieg?
What part will Robin play in the fight? Will she use her devil fruit to beat up the nameless multiple pirates who serve Don Krieg?
6/11/2022 c9 hentaigameing3412
You just made ace execution even more sad not only will luffa cry this time so will robin
You just made ace execution even more sad not only will luffa cry this time so will robin
6/11/2022 c21 
100SilentNinja
The difference to Nami's resolve on trusting Luffy's crew with her help can intermediately get Sanji to agree into joining because of Nami. I ship Sanji x Nami besides Luffy x Robin. Good job here!
100SilentNinjaThe difference to Nami's resolve on trusting Luffy's crew with her help can intermediately get Sanji to agree into joining because of Nami. I ship Sanji x Nami besides Luffy x Robin. Good job here!
6/11/2022 c21 3Kenka
You know, I love your explanation of why Luffy is childish, I have been watching One Piece on Crunchyroll and see how Luffy acts childish and that he ate the Gomu-Gomu Fruit as a kid the electric synapses in his brain can only fire like they did when was a kid. I like it when an author takes time to explain it, like why Naruto is hyperactive is due to the excessive amounts of chakra in his system giving him something akin to ADHD. Looking forward to the next update.
3KenkaYou know, I love your explanation of why Luffy is childish, I have been watching One Piece on Crunchyroll and see how Luffy acts childish and that he ate the Gomu-Gomu Fruit as a kid the electric synapses in his brain can only fire like they did when was a kid. I like it when an author takes time to explain it, like why Naruto is hyperactive is due to the excessive amounts of chakra in his system giving him something akin to ADHD. Looking forward to the next update.
6/11/2022 c1 Nanonano15243
I loved the way you dealt with Sanji so far and I’m glad nami is going to tell them about her situation instead of running away. Thou I’ve been meaning to ask if you are going to have nami in a relationship or not
I loved the way you dealt with Sanji so far and I’m glad nami is going to tell them about her situation instead of running away. Thou I’ve been meaning to ask if you are going to have nami in a relationship or not
5/30/2022 c20 Guest
So wher meeting sanji next chapter I don’t think luffy is gonna like Saji flirting with Robin and sanji is going to no balistic that someone like luffy has Robin as girlfriend.
I think he will go into denial or be just so swept up in fantasy that he doesn’t realise until she is literally kissing luffy and then he would go mad.
So wher meeting sanji next chapter I don’t think luffy is gonna like Saji flirting with Robin and sanji is going to no balistic that someone like luffy has Robin as girlfriend.
I think he will go into denial or be just so swept up in fantasy that he doesn’t realise until she is literally kissing luffy and then he would go mad.