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20F-ckthesystem125
I like it, but it has typos and missing words. Keep up the good work.
20F-ckthesystem125I like it, but it has typos and missing words. Keep up the good work.
4/14/2022 c16 searge
This is definitely an interesting story; glad to see Luffy and Robin as a couple at the start of the adventure, and am looking forward for more chapters!
This is definitely an interesting story; glad to see Luffy and Robin as a couple at the start of the adventure, and am looking forward for more chapters!
3/28/2022 c13 Guest
Honest question: Why did you decide to write this?
You tweaked a little bit here and there, added and deleted some scenes, but actually, it's still practically the same as the existing one. It's not even an improved or better version, similar plot aside, the dialogues and writing style are exactly the same, even the grammar and spelling mistakes are still there. At the very least, you should've changed the way it was written.
Honest question: Why did you decide to write this?
You tweaked a little bit here and there, added and deleted some scenes, but actually, it's still practically the same as the existing one. It's not even an improved or better version, similar plot aside, the dialogues and writing style are exactly the same, even the grammar and spelling mistakes are still there. At the very least, you should've changed the way it was written.
3/27/2022 c5 9Kolomte'49
It's been a time since I watched some story of One Piece. I like to say this is what I find, cause I like all the development of this first part.
But at the same time, it has planted a doubt which I like to ask your opinion about canon. Could it get better the story of Oda if another person of Ohara survives? Someone who wanna chase Robin in vengeance for the people of Ohara, cause they were victims of the Scholar's Actions?
It was something that come into my mind after reading Garp's declaration by Olivia's claims about the marines killing her friends.
What do you think about it? Could you respond to me in a PM, it's going to be a while before I can continue reading your story.
9Kolomte'49It's been a time since I watched some story of One Piece. I like to say this is what I find, cause I like all the development of this first part.
But at the same time, it has planted a doubt which I like to ask your opinion about canon. Could it get better the story of Oda if another person of Ohara survives? Someone who wanna chase Robin in vengeance for the people of Ohara, cause they were victims of the Scholar's Actions?
It was something that come into my mind after reading Garp's declaration by Olivia's claims about the marines killing her friends.
What do you think about it? Could you respond to me in a PM, it's going to be a while before I can continue reading your story.
2/27/2022 c15 Guest
Nice chapter.
Nice chapter.
2/26/2022 c15 Ani-Me Fanboy 123
Happy you where able to release a chapter. I believe there was a story similar to this one that stopped around Orange Town as well was worried it happen again. Odd imagining Luffy and Robin so openly showing romantic affection get it being normal to them though hung out in woods together alone since being kids doing that normal to them. I'm more surprised Olivia or Dadan never saw it and gave them the talk thing teenagers usually get from parents lol. The arc I'm looking forward to is Skypia if you still make Enel vs Zoro, Robin, Gan Fall, and Wyper still happen. Luffy already angry at him for hurting nakama and taking Nami imagine he sees his girlfriend Robin beat the hell up when he told Olivia he'd take care of her super angry Luffy! Hope you can continue your fanfiction story been fun so far.
Happy you where able to release a chapter. I believe there was a story similar to this one that stopped around Orange Town as well was worried it happen again. Odd imagining Luffy and Robin so openly showing romantic affection get it being normal to them though hung out in woods together alone since being kids doing that normal to them. I'm more surprised Olivia or Dadan never saw it and gave them the talk thing teenagers usually get from parents lol. The arc I'm looking forward to is Skypia if you still make Enel vs Zoro, Robin, Gan Fall, and Wyper still happen. Luffy already angry at him for hurting nakama and taking Nami imagine he sees his girlfriend Robin beat the hell up when he told Olivia he'd take care of her super angry Luffy! Hope you can continue your fanfiction story been fun so far.
2/4/2022 c14 Guest
Good chapter. They really should not have pushed. Robin can be scary when she wants. Nami better talk fast next chapter.
Good chapter. They really should not have pushed. Robin can be scary when she wants. Nami better talk fast next chapter.
2/2/2022 c14 2ASL D Brothers
Awesome chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Also, about your new fanfic about MHA, I would suggest where you create a quirk for Izuku, but personally I would forego giving him OFA. There's so many stories on the MHA section of him having a quirk and then receiving OFA, making him overpowered to the point he doesn't struggle with any of his fights. But that's just me wanting to read something different than the usual. Whether you give him OFA or not is your choice alone, plus with either I will still read your story anyway. Take care!
2ASL D BrothersAwesome chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Also, about your new fanfic about MHA, I would suggest where you create a quirk for Izuku, but personally I would forego giving him OFA. There's so many stories on the MHA section of him having a quirk and then receiving OFA, making him overpowered to the point he doesn't struggle with any of his fights. But that's just me wanting to read something different than the usual. Whether you give him OFA or not is your choice alone, plus with either I will still read your story anyway. Take care!