1/18/2022 c13 Robin Chwan Fatliyansyah
Hey, you make a one piece story like luffy has the power of sasuke uchiha with his mother as Uchiha Naori makes Luffy save Chakra and Sharingan...luffy can use 5 elements and sharingan then after 2 years pass luffy get rinnegan in his left eye which comes from his mother. For the character of luffy, i prefer luffy who is cold, calm, and also smart. Robin couple

12/28/2021 c13 Guest
10/10 would recommend to friend. Need MOAR

12/27/2021 c13 BatGlare2020
Loving the whole story especially the Luffy/Robin moments. I wish you luck for your college assignments.

12/27/2021 c13 20F-ckthesystem125
I like it, but you really need to work on your spelling.

12/20/2021 c12 7Time Parad0x
I never got why Coby has to be included in nearly every One Piece fic ...

The last two chapters besides some banter were essentially a retelling of canon. Not sure if the story can keep me interested until the Arabasta arc since it is essentially the first thing Robin's absence as a member of Baroque works should be felt ... (I mean without her Crocodile might not even look for Pluton knowing he can't read the Poneglyphs in the first place)

12/15/2021 c11 Robin Chwan Fatliyansyah
Will Luffy and Robin have a child after 2 years?

12/13/2021 c11 Guest
Not much different from canon this chapter but the random love bird gags were fun.